Brosandi

Emma Robinson
Author: Emma Robinson
Word Count: 372
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I have a piece of music that I love. It is written in a foreign language, and I don’t understand the words. When I listen to it I always think that I can just pick out the odd word in English – it interests me how my mind latches on to the familiar, even when it is just an illusion of familiarity. Every time I hear it – every time – it makes me want to cry, but not because it makes me sad. Every time I hear it – every time – I have to stop what I am doing and really listen to it. Every time I hear it – every time – I hope that everyone has a piece of music, or a piece of art, or a piece of writing, or a piece of memory, or a piece of something that they hold close, and that makes them really feel something every time. I never ever tire of it.

For a long time I didn’t want to know what the words said. I felt that nothing could really live up to what that music meant in my head. If I knew what it said, would I feel differently about it? Could I really trust that the composers had written the right words to go with it? Did I love it more because the words were just part of the music to me, because I couldn’t understand what they said? Would understanding diminish it?

But I’m not a very patient person, and I’m not good at heeding my own counsel, so I looked up a translation of the words. And they were perfect. The song is about jumping in puddles. That’s it, it’s very simple. But now I understand why the music sparkles, and makes me feel joyful and nostalgic. I am glad every day that someone out there has written a beautiful song about the joys of being alive, and feeling lively enough to jump into those puddles like you did when you were a kid, not just mutter about the weather and put your umbrella up.

I have a piece of music that I love. It is written in a foreign language, but I think I understand it.

Brosandi

Written for 2 Word Challenge – Lively and Sparkle

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  • WanderingAuthor

    WanderingAuthor, 29 days ago

    I really enjoyed this. Of course, since I actually like listening to music in languages I don’t understand (I can write, and words won’t thrust themselves into my head that way), it spoke to me very directly. Still, I think most of us do have something we hold close that makes us feel something every time. I feel sorry for those who have no such thing in their lives.

  • filfil

    filfil, 29 days ago

    What I liked most was the questioning in the middle. You love something so much that you don’t want anything to ruin it. Great writing!

  • Emma Robinson

    Emma Robinson in reply to WanderingAuthor’s comment, 29 days ago

    Good I’m glad you liked it – I was having a bit of a crisis of confidence yesterday, and thinking that I was a bit of a fraud doing any writing, and that my beginners luck had caused my ego to run away with me and keep producing stuff…. and then I listened to this song and felt compelled to document my love for it! As I say above – I’m not very good at heeding my own counsel!

  • Emma Robinson

    Emma Robinson in reply to filfil’s comment, 29 days ago

    Thanks filfil – this one is straight from the heart to the keyboard really, so I’m glad you like it.

  • filfil

    filfil, 29 days ago

    What does the title mean?

  • Emma Robinson

    Emma Robinson in reply to filfil’s comment, 29 days ago

    The title is the first word of the song – the translation I have read states that it means ‘smiling’, which I think fits very nicely.

  • Miri

    Miri, 29 days ago

    Emma, this is soooo lovely, bought tears to my eyes just reading it, so NO crisis of confidence please :-)...i too have music and books and art like that, you’ve really tapped into a powerful feeling here

  • Emma Robinson

    Emma Robinson in reply to Miri’s comment, 29 days ago

    Oh mate! No tears please! But thank you for your lovely comment – I really appreciate it. I’m glad you have lots of things that make you feel that way – think life would be a bit glum without that stuff

    xxxx

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