poise: haiku ii
A friend of mine was sketching the legs of a ballet dancer when this poem formed in my mind. Written 6 August 2009.
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poised upon the brink of dance
breathlessly waiting
Ushna Sardar
beautifully written Jordan!
Uncle Artmonger
Beautiful visual.
Well done.
JonoCarrick
this is an amazing tribute to motion and movement.
Kristin Reynolds
this is an excellent haiku, perfect essence of the dance, or rather, the waiting to…lovely. Kristin
RebeccaWeston
Fabulously written haiku, Jordan XX
Becca
JRGarland
Perfectly executed haiku. Wonderfully written.
erika15
ah this is elegant writing! Pure grace and elegance. I like how you wrote this idea you had in a haiku, it adds more detailed beauty, if that makes sense. :)
Shoaib .
awesome haiku.. good work man