dreams of lace and darkness
Written 29 July 2009.
dreams of lace and darkness belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Ebony and Ivory, Freedom In Words & Art, Freedom to Shine, Imperfectly, Lifeline, Light In The Darkness, Live, Love, Dream: , Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Midnight Ramblers, On Youth, The Art of Pain, The beauty of poetry, The Healing Journey, The Sensual Word, Up & Coming Writers and WMGpassion gathers in the heavy air
thickly the darkness, tinged with desire
wraps itself around our bodies
we fall
into this last embrace
drink deep
from the reservoir of night
let it fill us
slipping into dream
we go to the dark gods
pledge ourselves
in love-bound commune
baptized in fire and flame
this sacrament of flesh
steals our minds
for but a moment
carries us away
as we fall
into dreams
of lace and darkness
Robin Brown
Beautifully crafted words Elucidate!!
Erika .
we go to the dark gods
pledge ourselves
in love-bound commune
baptized in fire and flame....this poem is dark and seductive, and yet so tasteful and elegant. Very dreamy too ;)
KEITH R. WILL...
beautiful indeed
linaji
Your ability to paint a picture feels so good!!
RebeccaWeston
Very beautiful !! XX
Becca
RVRFNX
Very evocative! Thanks for sharing :D
Mikyle
Evocative and sensual… I love this poem… As Erika perfectly says, its so dark and seductive yet so tasteful and elegant… I couldn’t find better words to describe it myself… xxx
Cassidy JK (Ra...
I like lace and darkness. Very sensual duet.
Shoaib .
awesome work… love this peice
oneperfectkiss
Very sensual Jordan. We are sexual creatures but I appreciate the tasteful way you constructed this. xx
MaryK
Magnificent!
Matt Penfold
Deep and dark Jordan and laced with lust. nice work.
BiographyofRed8
Your words are spellbinding, well crafted taking the reader into the sensuality of the piece, I like this one a lot!
hollypaino
sensual and dark. Very nice!