today i wrote you a poem...

very achey. haven’t we all been there.

This is truly special…......”and in it i whispered a solitary secret”
wonderful words and wisdoms….....sandra x

WELLL.. when it’s good it attracts immed!! tee hee.. xo

beautiful, horrible, wonderful! x

Father’s Day isn’t all that nice, is it?

What is there to do but just see the cracks and know it is there…..I wanted instinctively to rip up the floorboards and find the note and give it back to you….to give you another opportunity to rip the note up or to give it to the recipient…...I guess I am remembering a similar situation and a little bit of true friendship would of been quite handy…especially if it came with some carpentry skills…. :))).......All that aside.. Ouch!

the lightest of touches.

So gorgeous is your writing. Big hugs.

One of your best, no doubt.
You inspire me so much.

Wonderfully written..

it slipped through
my shaking fingers
and fell
into a crack
in the floorboards

i never told you what it said
i couldn’t find the courage

excellent written Jordan!

wonderful and touching…

WOW…..................................................... That’s so very lovely and cool too..
Nice work too!!!!!!
=D

I really am at a loss for words…this is just packed with so much emotion. Simply indescribable.

ah, wow this is so beautiful but it made me so sad !! XX {{hug}}
XX Becca

lovely and sad…..

sometimes I see such moments reflected in your work so when I read it, and especially ones like this, with so few words you have this amazing ability to create raw emotions. this could be a reflection of similar moments into the mirror.. your such an amazing writer

This showcases real honesty and vulnerability.
As refreshing as homemade lemonade.
Thank You.

there you go again…simply full.

Beautiful work, indeed, dear J.

Pretty good, but will it stand the test of Time? (not the poem, the love). JH

very pretty

beautiful jordan.

lost letters into the sea of oblivion and all that goes with them. love you sweetheart xxx

Nice !!!!

wow

i do believe that is twice you have made me lost for words!!!
(after a couple of minutes thisis all i could come up with) – such sadness in such a beautiful piece; you are such an amazing writer
xx

aw thats really sweet and deep

<3>

i like it but whoever yu were speaking of should have known dont be a wut if !

Well written, the structure perfect. I like this a lot

wow .. awesome work man !! this is great !!

Beautiful. xx

beautiful, heartfelt writing, tinged with loss.

This is so bitter-sweet…

Oh yes.. how i’ve been there…

This is so beautiful. really :)

Beautiful!!