ushna

you write as though your mind
is plugged into the wall socket
of the universe’s creativity
plugged into
a whirling
vortex

of charged emotion
that races through
the pathways
of your mind
and crackles onto paper
burning its electric brilliance
onto the waiting page
cutting to the bare bones
of the soul
and the spirit

asking questions about
things i never knew
giving answers
to things i thought i did
enlightening
exploring
ushna

  • Isa Rodriguez

    Isa Rodriguez

    so right on! shes just a star in that universal diamond . the one that shines . so bright.. thanks for doing this poem. i love it and I love Ushna.

  • Anthea  Slade

    Anthea Slade

    A stunning dedication to talented and inspiring woman Ushna. I am sure she will be very touched by this Jordan.

  • Erika .

    Erika .

    Wow...Iove this part:
    plugged into the wall socket
    of the universe’s creativity
    plugged into
    a whirling
    vortex...really awesome poem! I’ve never read Ushna’s poems. I think I’m missing out on something amazing here, this makes me want to go and read her poems. :D

  • Jerry Zhang

    Jerry Zhang

    beautiful

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    very cool.. yah she does write like that .. awesome tribute

  • linaji

    linaji

    This is amazing. !! I hope she sees this!!!!

  • DarKarsean

    DarKarsean

    electric writing

  • HansBellani

    HansBellani

    A tribute, par excellence…

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar

    Jordan! I’m speachless!!! thank you so much for writing great words for me! I thoroughly emjoyed this n touched by your words! you’re such a sweetheart! .. XO ….
    Love&Peace….. Ushna.

  • annamora

    annamora

    this is excellent .. just now I have started reading Ushna’s poetry and this is such a great tribute …. congratulations to you and to Ushna ….. :)
    Anna

  • Mukesh Srivastava

    Mukesh Srivastava

    Great dedication for a star writer!!!!! Love these words:
    “burning its electric brilliance
    onto the waiting page
    cutting to the bare bones
    of the soul
    and the spirit”

  • Mikyle

    Mikyle

    Fantastic. Ushna must be proud. I have yet to read her work.
    P.s – Your opening lines to this poem are sheer genius!

  • JonoCarrick

    JonoCarrick

    A brilliant tribute to an extraordinary woman!!!!!!

  • MarkezzAckui ...

    MarkezzAckui ...

    nice piece

  • Cassey

    Cassey

    Beautiful tribute to a wonderful woman and friend!

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