new world
Written 26 May 2009.
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like vertebrae
they arch and buckle
breaching their earthen constraints -
straining towards
the cold clear
daylight
the rich soil
cloying and damp
hides their secret hearts
deep beneath
the earth
theirs is
an eon-long labour
a titanic struggle
to bring to light
the birth
of a new world
Erika .
an eon-long labour
a titanic struggle
to bring to light
the birth
of a new world....this is amazing….I can see the earth cracking open and give to light and freedom….Again, inspiring writing, my friend.
Jordan Busson replied
Thanks, my friend. I was supposed to be writing an English essay, but instead I wrote this poem. It’s one of my ‘two-minute creations’.
skinnyman
regeneration, such a positive theme. Expressed so well.
Jordan Busson replied
“Regeneration”
That’s it exactly. Thank you for your words.
marthie
as dit maar net so kon wees. dis amper of dit so moet wees
Jordan Busson replied
Ek dink ook so, my vriend. Maar, die wereld is verander.
Shoaib .
Jordan Busson replied
Honoured, Shoaib!
BiographyofRed8
sublime and enlightened words!!!
Jordan Busson replied
Thank you, Red!
Plum
I hope this is really happening on some level – the birth of a new world – maybe that’s why there is so much chaos – a crossover happening. So well expressed.
Jordan Busson replied
Wow, Plum. I really can relate to what you’ve said. Interesting idea… Thank you for your words ;)
MrHill
This is very good..thank you….
Jordan Busson replied
Thank you ;)
rubyjo
yep, love the imagery.
Jordan Busson replied
Thanks, ruby.
valentina63
your imagery is tunning “like vertebrae they arch and buckle ”. Beuatiful! You are are painter with words.
Jordan Busson replied
Painting with words is what I strive to achieve.
Thank you, Valentina.