colourblind
jordan busson. 14 may 2009.
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i don’t see
superficial differences
like skin
colour
black and
white
are words on paper
syllables
strung together
and nothing more
than clinging culture
trying to stay alive
in a changed world
this berlin wall
of race
is cracking
will it
crumble
down
in ruin?
erika15
It HAS to crumble down in ruin….I really think it will. We just have to make it happen. Love the message in this, my friend. I can relate. I think a fellow Bubbler, Colorblind would like this. :)
Jordan Busson replied
I’ve seen him around: he should read it ;)
Thank you, Erika. It is us who need to make a difference. The youth of today hold in their hands, the future of tomorrow.
H M Bascom
Excellent writing!
Jordan Busson replied
Thank you!
colorblind
i love this truly and i thank my friend erika15 for referring me to your lovely poem
and the wall shall crumble it has evidence of cracks and it falling to pieces
seen in the
bi racial children
the laughter of many variations of colors of children playing at parks
and by the friendships tying together no matter race or backgrounds
smilez…...
black and
white
are words on paper
syllables
strung together …..well said
truly love this …..reminds me of my latest poem i’ve posted “The Human Race”
take care ….enjoyed reading this
Jordan Busson replied
I’m glad that you could read this, colorblind. With people like you in the world, I suspect that change for the better is inevitable. I’ll take a look at your poem: it sounds like something I’d like.
tracyxkeema
well written message x
Jordan Busson replied
Thank you, Tracy!
ArcadiaTempest
We need more of you…..your eyes see the way we all should see. A well crafted verse with a lesson for the world….keep writing…you will make changes. X
Jordan Busson replied
Thank you, KarenSue. We must be the change we want to see in the world.
Paul Morley
Here, Here! Great words.
Jordan Busson replied
Thank you, Paul!
wigs
fabulous message and so very well put….
Jordan Busson replied
I really appreciate it, wigs. Thanks for stopping by ;)
BiographyofRed8
your writing rocks!!!!!!!
Jordan Busson replied
Thanks, Red ;D
erika15
Just read this again and I couldn’t help but comment and point out this part:
this berlin wall
of race
is cracking .....just love that!
Jordan Busson replied
Thank you, friend ;)
imagineering
Prejudice is the child of ignorance….
A well-written piece.
Jordan Busson replied
How incredibly true.
Thank you.
Alison Pearce
Wonderful!!!
Jordan Busson replied
Thank you!