La Sirena Varada
Written 28 April 2009. Featured in On Youth.
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ensnared me -
i was caught
from the first note
when you spun
your spell around me
and enmeshed me
in your dark enchantment
from across an ocean of sleep
you called to me
wove a web of wonders
‘round my heart
and i became tangled
in your net
of nightingale dreams
drawn to your heart’s sea
where you sat
a lone figure
on a storm-circled rock
la sirena varada
taking solace in solitude
you spin the strands of men’s fate
with words
and music
i am drawn to you
like a dying man to prayer
like a lover to silken sheets
like a moth to flame
and loving you
is like a dream
erika15
C’est tres belle, mon ami! :)
Instant favorite.
Elucidate replied
Merci, mon sirena varada.
RebeccaWeston
Such a beautiful picture of a siren – excellent XX
Elucidate replied
Thank you, Rebecca. I’m glad I painted her true.
butchart
another wonderful piece filled with magical images…..... you are on a roll…..... bravo my friend…......b
Elucidate replied
Thank you, Butch. Indeed I am. I’ve written five pieces today, and designed one t-shirt. And I’ve still got one more poem to upload, as well as an unfinished essay titled “We Had a Dream”. Creativity flows.
Lisa Jewell
A wonderful devotional outpouring of true love….
Beautifully written.
Elucidate replied
Thank you, Lisa.
Anthea Slade
Ah this poem is a dance of the most deeply felt love and admiration. A real joy to read Jordan.
Elucidate replied
Anthea, your words are always just what I need to here. Thank you, for them, and the fav.
koby
fantastic
Elucidate replied
Thank you, Koby.
Tracey Walker
Great! The words are extremely soothing, luring and slightly dark…just the way I like a poem! I am interested in the sea and mermaids myself…
CLiPiCs
Congratulaions on the Challenge win Jordan and Erika
well done to both of you
Love ‘N’ Laughter Kriss ♥