Standing on the edge,
it is the laughter causing the cliff to crumble.
If you are very quiet – you will hear it too.
Like steam from a teakettle, it is constantly erupting,
spreading and dissipating.
Shhhh. Listen. Did you hear it?
Falling
Standing on the edge,
it is the laughter causing the cliff to crumble.
If you are very quiet – you will hear it too.
Like steam from a teakettle, it is constantly erupting,
spreading and dissipating.
Shhhh. Listen. Did you hear it?
braphoto, 4 months ago
Yes I can hear it!...fantastic… GREAT!!!
silveraya, 4 months ago
so short and almost understated yet it says so much. evocative!
filthy6, 4 months ago
Listening…. listening…. aah! There it is! I hear it!
Time for a cuppa…
Lovely words, Meg. I guess laughter causes the cliff of pain to crumble.
Richard Veal, 4 months ago
The words are as if from a recurring bad dream.
Thats what i read into it. Nice work Megan.
botticcelli, 4 months ago
wonderful verses !!
Rachael Hope, 4 months ago
“it is the laughter causing the cliff to crumble.
If you are very quiet – you will hear it too. ” I love these lines, I love the whole thing
elliewinds in reply to Rachael Hope’s comment, 4 months ago
thanks!
lolowe, 3 months ago
This is really great, I could almost hear it myself. If I’m quiet enough.