The Banshee Awoke......  by ellamental
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The Banshee Awoke...... by

And let out a shriek,
So loud I thought I’d killed the freak.

She wailed and bemoaned up a terrific dustThat swirled and hurled into dawn then dusk.

A day was lost in that frightening storm,
It never took shape, it had no form.

When suddenly a face appeared,
Not nearly as ugly as I had feared.

She glided and shimmered right through my coat,
Reaching my soul and there she spoke…
“You do not want the Banshee Awoke”

With sharp icicles poking all of my flesh,
I crawled to a stone that warmed my head, blood trickled down all around me …. nightshine falling on the trails I bled.

The morning light never brighter,

I knew she was fed.

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When we can each do that then we will be living a true life.
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Comments

  • BlueKnot
    BlueKnotover 1 year ago

    love the abstraction here… how the shape of the face is only suggested…

    a face on the fog; not just a creature of night but a creature that is night.

  • Thank you Dan… It has that feel to me also ….glad you got it!!!

    – ellamental

  • Druidstorm
    Druidstormover 1 year ago

    Like the siren’s of night your image gave me a fright and made me take flight but not before it gave me a nasty BITE! Cool render my friend! Bravo, bravo!!!…)o(

  • thanks, hope she doesn’t follow you into your dreamworld!!

    – ellamental

  • SofaKingWeird
    SofaKingWeirdover 1 year ago

    Very nice Ella, I like this one a bunch!

  • Thank you Troy, It’s good to see you again!!!

    – ellamental

  • Deborah Lazarus
    Deborah Lazarusover 1 year ago

  • Thanks Deb!!!!!

    – ellamental

  • Ann Morgan
    Ann Morganover 1 year ago

    Like the writing on this one!!!

  • T. Wall ~Through My Lens ~
    T. Wall ~Throu...over 1 year ago

    Congratulations! Very Wicked Work!

  • Thank you for this and your comment!!!

    – ellamental

  • Michael McCasland
    Michael McCaslandover 1 year ago

    Beautiful work and a well deserved congratulations! Always good ellemental!

  • Thank you Michael, your comments mean a lot to me!!!

    – ellamental

  • leunig
    leunigover 1 year ago


    well done