SMEARED DAYS ON MY SHOULDERS

elfevans
Author: elfevans
Word Count: 36
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My satchel is often patched.
Life’s sands oozing about, shoving
in granular fashion, to be last.

Smeared days on my shoulders.
Weightlessly holding arms,
Eager to hold another’s.

Whose satchel is often patched, too!

SMEARED DAYS ON MY SHOULDERS

SMEARED DAYS ON MY SHOULDERS belongs to the following groups:

AW Welcome Center and DaDa Land
  • Phil Cashdollar

    Phil Cashdollar, 7 months ago

    say it….

  • coffeetea

    coffeetea, 7 months ago

    very touching poetry, can see that in mind heart, a bit sad…

  • Paul Alleyne

    Paul Alleyne, 7 months ago

    Very emotive piece, Elf. Very real for most of us.

  • jamiewinter

    jamiewinter, 7 months ago

    you can write well Elf. very moving piece

  • Kathleen Struckle

    Kathleen Struckle, 7 months ago

    Very touching Elf!!

  • Lori Smaltz

    Lori Smaltz, 7 months ago

    Smooth and lyrical as a song!

  • caroline caux-evans

    caroline caux-..., 6 months ago

    searching, longing,sharing!!!!!

  • C.C. Arshagra

    C.C. Arshagra, 5 months ago

    To shoulder still alone is never lonely, Love on fellow patched one!

  • debrakcarey

    debrakcarey, 4 months ago

    It is obvious you are in touch with your inner self….intriguing emotions here.

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