elfevans

I MISSED HER CALL

Boxes plugging,

All sizes.

Preventing, obscuring

Adhering to the foul sketch.

Me….pulling

Stepping,

Over, through and

Beyond

Borders treacherously

Flicking reddened tongues

At my feet.

While the dream

Released me to

Answer the phone.

  • Juilee P Pryor

    Juilee P Pryor, 5 months ago

    I really like this one elf. don’t stop now. its great.

  • Leon Walker

    Leon Walker, 5 months ago

    Excellent Elf. There is clarity in this thought.

  • Marvin Tunstall

    Marvin Tunstall, 5 months ago

    WOW! That is awesome…Deep! keep them coming!

  • Jen Whyte

    Jen Whyte, 5 months ago

    These words really speak and say anything you want to hear … now that’s what I call audience participation!

  • hilarydougill

    hilarydougill, 5 months ago

    Excellent prose., well written,. graphic.

  • blamo

    blamo, 5 months ago

    very very clever you have a great way with words

  • sra58

    sra58, 5 months ago

    Beautiful, Elf.
    Sharon

  • Arnold Isbister

    Arnold Isbister, 5 months ago

    great words in how you used them, beautiful…..

  • Lori Smaltz

    Lori Smaltz, 5 months ago

    i’ve missed a call before…. however it all turned out for the best to this day even! LOL

    Great words ecspecially the the red tongues! Wild…just wild sorta like cats that need fed!

    L **

  • Roger Sampson

    Roger Sampson, 5 months ago

    Ahh, the challenges of getting to a ringing phone from a dead sleep amongst obstacles. That’s what I picture. You’re pretty darn agile but not quick enough. What word did you use when you stubbed your toe? Great writing Elf my friend.

    Rog

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February 5, 2008