The Shadow Stands

Standing lonely on the platform

Looking down the tracks

I can’t see very far through the fog

Thickened with smoke from factory stacks

I hear the distant whistle

An eerie lonesome sound

A chill runs through my body

As I quickly turn around

There’s a shadowy figure standing

Not too far from me

He is not moving but I feel his eyes

Upon me, staring relentlessly

The train whistle is getting closer

I hear the rails echoing the rumbling

The familiar clicks and clacks

I can’t move, afraid of stumbling

The train pulls in, doors open

To the dimly lit interior

The shadowy figure walks through me

My mind goes crazy with hysteria

I stand there alone on the platform

As the ghostly train goes on it’s way

My feet won’t move, I’m feeling faint

A haunting whistle in the distance has it’s say

What did I just experience

Was the Shadow just an apparition

Had I just discovered a Shadow world

Had a look at it’s partition

The fog is thinning, and the whistle moans

The tracks foretell the coming of the train

The doors open wide to a friendly crowd

I smile at fellow travelers, on the way again

We’re pulling away from the platform

And I look back at where I had just been

There stands a shadowy figure with a grotesque face

I feel the vibrating echoes of my scream


Elsie  Duggan

The Shadow Stands by

This piece came to me while listening to to train whistles in the fog, by the river, not too far from where I live,

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Comments

  • Shoaib .
    Shoaib .about 2 years ago

    beautifully written :)

  • Elsie  Duggan
    Elsie Dugganabout 2 years ago

    Thank you Shoaib for reading, and commenting :)

  • Alison Pearce
    Alison Pearceabout 2 years ago

    Wow Elsie!! You’ve given me the chills! Amazingly written!

  • Thank you Allison, I seem to be doing things like this more often, hope you and yours are well and happy, love, Elsie

    – Elsie Duggan

  • tkrosevear
    tkrosevearabout 2 years ago

    I’m with Ali, definitely a goose-bumpy tale ;) love ya mom ♥

  • Thanks for reading Tammy, love you too, goodnight, Mom

    – Elsie Duggan

  • coppertrees
    coppertreesabout 2 years ago

    Beautiful words Elsie,gave me the gooser bumps

  • Thanks so much for reading it Vickie, meant to do that I think, love you, Elsie

    – Elsie Duggan

  • RosaCobos
    RosaCobosabout 2 years ago

    Shadows creepers..
    creeping inside our fearing dreams.
    Your life train goes there…breaking the mist,
    and you are guided by its wistles
    Move away…and the shadow will take the sun´s course.
    Rosa (love your insight..your sensorial experience here, half dream and reality, blended worlds of a solitary experience)

  • Elsie  Duggan
    Elsie Dugganabout 2 years ago

    Thank you Rosa for your lovely comment, enjoyed writing this one, don’t know why, Elsie