LOVED ONEFamily loved but then sadly lostAlways was there for youMemories are made to be treasuredillness making you go when you want to stayLoved ones are lost on this very dayYet to hope that we will all survive a nother dayand live our lives while we can.By Ebony avalos
Fantastic my baby it is so true, you have wisdom beyond your years
thanks master poppy it was in my head well basically stuck in my head but it was mostly because i was thinking of nanna avalos and how i miss her a lot but thanks for the comment
very beautiful Ebony… it made me sit back and think wow… may the love of your family always surround you whether they are beside you or not & may you live life.
thanks so much it is greatly appreaciated it was a very hard poem to write and i gave it all i had and it has turned out to be great and to find out that many people like it and that is what makes me smile
Ebony , this is a beautiful piece of writing. My dear Nan has just been diagnosed with untreatable cancer, your words are a true comfort. Thank you for sharing.
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beautiful written eb’s
thank you wolfman very much
– ebonyjane
this is amazing ebony, I agree with stu.
love you baby girl
thank you very much mum love you lots to
– ebonyjane
well done little miss
thank you kindly iqorpaulie
– ebonyjane
Fantastic my baby it is so true, you have wisdom beyond your years
thanks master poppy
it was in my head well basically stuck in my head but it was mostly
because i was thinking of nanna avalos and how i miss her a lot
but thanks for the comment
– ebonyjane
Wonderfully poignant, marvelously expressed!!
thanks very much
– ebonyjane
very beautiful Ebony… it made me sit back and think wow… may the love of your family always surround you whether they are beside you or not & may you live life.
thanks so much it is greatly appreaciated it was a very hard poem to write and i gave it all i had and it has turned out to be great and to find out that many people like it and that is what makes me smile
– ebonyjane
Ebony , this is a beautiful piece of writing. My dear Nan has just been diagnosed with untreatable cancer, your words are a true comfort. Thank you for sharing.
sorry to hear such a bad thing,your very welcome
– ebonyjane