my poem about family
FAMILY
Family loved but then sadly lost
Always was there for you and me
Memories are made to be treasured
illness making you go when we want you to stay
Loved ones are lost on this very day
Yet to hope we all survive a nother day
and live life while we can.
by ebonyjane
shilohlin
such deep and profound writing for a young girl. this is very well written.
your photos are awesome too*
ebonyjane replied
thank you kindly shilohlin
wolfman
wow so deep so well written and so proud of you ebby jane always new you were like you’r mother….............:):):)....wolfman
ebonyjane replied
thank you very very much wolfman :}:}
MOC2
Very beautifully written ebony.
ebonyjane replied
thank you moc2
dairygirl08
very beautiful and powerful my baby girl, I am very proud of you!! :)
ebonyjane replied
thank you mummy
ozjami
Very very good writing Eb’s ..keep writing !!!
ebonyjane replied
thank you very very much uncle james
janeymac
very touching Ebonyjane excellent Jane
ebonyjane replied
thank u very much janemac
deliriousgirl
You have a great talent with words, m’dear! I am impressed and I’m soooo old and jaded that I don’t impress easily these days. Please do keep on keeping on, sweetheart!
ebonyjane replied
thank you very much