ebonyjane

my poem about family by ebonyjane

Posted on April 27, 2008

FAMILYFamily loved but then sadly lostAlways was there for you and meMemories are made to be treasuredillness making you go when we want you to stayLoved ones are lost on this very dayYet to hope we all survive a nother dayand live life while we can.

by ebonyjane

  • shilohlin

    shilohlin

    such deep and profound writing for a young girl. this is very well written.
    your photos are awesome too*

  • ebonyjane:

    thank you kindly shilohlin

  • wolfman

    wolfman

    wow so deep so well written and so proud of you ebby jane always new you were like you’r mother…………….:):):)….wolfman

  • ebonyjane:

    thank you very very much wolfman :}:}

  • MOC2

    MOC2

    Very beautifully written ebony.

  • ebonyjane:

    thank you moc2

  • dairygirl08

    dairygirl08

    very beautiful and powerful my baby girl, I am very proud of you!! :)

  • ebonyjane:

    thank you mummy

  • ozjami

    ozjami

    Very very good writing Eb’s ..keep writing !!!

  • ebonyjane:

    thank you very very much uncle james

  • janeymac

    janeymac

    very touching Ebonyjane excellent Jane

  • ebonyjane:

    thank u very much janemac

  • deliriousgirl

    deliriousgirl

    You have a great talent with words, m’dear! I am impressed and I’m soooo old and jaded that I don’t impress easily these days. Please do keep on keeping on, sweetheart!

  • ebonyjane:

    thank you very much

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