The Path You Chose

I am liquid, I am a pill…
try me now for that thrill.

Take me once, take me twice…
I go down smooth and nice.

The pain is gone, I’m now your friend…
I’ll stay with you until the end.

You’re now addicted to the rush…
it is our secret, keep it a hush.

You’ll do whatever to get that fix…
it’s nothing but poison in that mix.

You’re weak and worn and dying inside…
All you heard was all a lie.

I won this battle that you have lost…
I took your soul which was your cost.

Welcome to HELL!!!

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Featured in “Write, Express Yourself” 6-10-2014

Featured in “Art Inspired by Words” 2-17-2014

Featured in “Feminine Intent” 10-19-2013

Featured in “Vavoom” 10-16-2013

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poem, words

I love the arts…nature…animals…
I find my peace while photographing
the beauty around me…
sunrises, sunsets, trees, flowers, animals,
the lake, architecture…
I also like to draw and back in the 80s, I loved all of the work by
Patrick Nagel, and I was doing drawings like his!!!

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Comments

  • Carol Knudsen
    Carol Knudsenabout 1 year ago

    Wow….poignant and powerful work Dawn!

  • TY very much Carol…I just wrote it earl this morning :-)

    – Dawn M. Becker

  • tori yule
    tori yuleabout 1 year ago

    Our choices sometimes have disastrous consequences, Powerful write for those that have chosen this path, Dawn. I would love to see this in Vibration in Art and Verse and Feminine Intent.

  • TY very much Tori and I’ll submit :-)

    – Dawn M. Becker

  • paintingsheep
    paintingsheepabout 1 year ago

    For every up a down…cause and effect!! Excellent work!!

  • TY very much :-)

    – Dawn M. Becker

  • Donna19
    Donna19about 1 year ago

    A feeling work Dawn

  • TY very much Donna :-)

    – Dawn M. Becker

  • Donna19
    Donna19about 1 year ago


    Congratulations

  • How awesome!!! TY so very much :-)

    – Dawn M. Becker

  • KathleenRinker
    KathleenRinkerabout 1 year ago

    Very true words…wonderful work Dawn!!

  • TY very much :-)

    – Dawn M. Becker

  • tori yule
    tori yuleabout 1 year ago
  • How awesomely cool…TY so very much Tori :-)

    – Dawn M. Becker

  • autumnwind
    autumnwindabout 1 year ago

    Had to comment here, powerful write and message. Congrats on your features. xoxoxoxxo

  • TY so very much :-)

    – Dawn M. Becker

  • Ann Warrenton
    Ann Warrenton8 months ago

    February 17,2014 Congratulations, good story, but sad.

  • Awesome…TY very much :-)

    – Dawn M. Becker

  • Ann Warrenton
    Ann Warrenton5 months ago

    June 10,2014 Congratulations!

  • WOW how awesomely cool!!! TY so very much Ann :-)

    – Dawn M. Becker

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