Into No Mans Land

Mud anchored boots to the trench. One hand gripped the ladder tightly, the other his rifle.
Rain beat the steel helmet, cascading in front of his eyes.
Across cratered fields shells crashed sending pieces of land, machinery and men skywards.
Hands shook from the cold; from the fear.
A shrill whistle, then over the top with just one thought.
“Survive”


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trench, ww1

Comments

  • Lisa  Jewell
    Lisa Jewellover 4 years ago

    You’ve captured immense terror with very few words….

    Great writing

  • xstephens
    xstephensover 4 years ago

    great imagery…nice work

  • danpatmore
    danpatmoreover 4 years ago

    It’s the concise nature of this that I like best. Concise even for flash fiction!

  • Natella2020
    Natella2020over 4 years ago

    Wow, excellent writing. Very human, and all the more exquisite because of it.

  • Anne van Alkemade
    Anne van Alkemadeover 4 years ago

    well done Dwireland.

  • silvizee
    silvizeeover 4 years ago

    Fast fuelled narrative.