This is the first piece of poetry I’ve written in the last fifteen or so years, if memory serves. Still needs a bit of work to tweak the language, I reckon, so I dare say this will change over the next few weeks. But it’s a start. If not a very cheerful one!
A glimmer of what’s beneath? I don’t think – Cocooned in solitude- is tautology at all (maybe cocooned BY solitude) but it’s being picky….use your poetic license…leave it. Really lovely Duro…poignant.
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urgh, Duro, keep writing, if only for me! Beautiful – way to tug at my heart strings :)
Still think “cocooned in solitude” is a tautology. That’s gonna change soon.
foir your first attempt in 15 years, it’s pretty rad. accept the compliments
I will. Thank you!
I agree. Fabulous for your first attempt in 15 years! Keep ’em coming.
I’m with Patricia and Mel, Keep em coming!
Love your photography too, and hope to
get one of your T’s someday.
A glimmer of what’s beneath? I don’t think – Cocooned in solitude- is tautology at all (maybe cocooned BY solitude) but it’s being picky….use your poetic license…leave it. Really lovely Duro…poignant.