A serene cacophony

Behind me, a fridge door repeatedly opens and closes, punctuating the clink of crockery and utensils. Quiet chatter and bustle.The urgent sound of milk being forced into action for a capuccino. And again. In the background (it’s all background), the chatter and gossip of birdlife, the interlocutors hidden among shadowed paperbarks. They conspire occasionally to drown out the culinary commotion, then retreat into quiescence.

Midmorning traffic, intermittently trying to lay a post-industrial veneer over the placid scene, but not being entirely successful. The lagoon in front of me is receiving attention from a young man; he is corralling weeds on the surface with floats and net. Steadily, with unhurried pace, he skims the weed-strewn surface, until the unwanted flora is contained in a small enclosure one one bank. Carefully, intently, he draws it in to leave a clear surface once more. Finishes the task with rake and barrow.

A midmorning Virgin, headed south, momentarily disturbs the peace. It passes quickly, leaving its avian role models in charge once again.

The water surface, calm just moments ago, is now a frenzy of interwoven ripples, as myriad insects go about their routine. Busily, they skim and skate in an invisible free-form choreography betrayed only by the undulating boundary between open air and aquatic obscurity. The human chatter has now built to a modest hubbub, as the tables, once empty and quiet, fill with twos and threes seeking a morning break. Two toddlers, restless; mum stands watch – her attention divided between dancing insects and her diminutive dynamos – cajoling, controlling. The arrival of carrot cake and coffee seems to calm the little ones. Baby chocaccinos work their magic, and mum can relax. For now.


Duncan Waldron

A serene cacophony by

Observations during a quiet morning cuppa.

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Comments

  • RosaCobos
    RosaCobosalmost 3 years ago

    Perfect Duncan….
    all the sounds in my mind resounding.
    All the movements of personages,
    from human to animal…
    from roaring to soflty paddling on the water.
    And…I even have got the smell of coffee…
    for there is not other better smell that the strong vapour
    emerging from the pipe and warming the milk..
    and seeing it dancing on the dark and oily surface.
    mmmmm……
    Where did you go…
    after that?
    Rosa (a hug!…)

  • [blushes] thank you Rosa. It really was an interesting transformation from very quiet and peaceful to gentle bustle and quiet crowds gathering at tables. Glad it hit home :)
    After that, I went round the corner to collect my car from its annual safety inspection – very prosaic!

    – Duncan Waldron

  • RosaCobos
    RosaCobosalmost 3 years ago

    Will you like to submmit it to Nirvana

  • Duncan Waldron
    Duncan Waldronalmost 3 years ago

    Strange, I did tick that button last night. Never mind, it’s done now.