The Small Crack (15.11.03)

The small crack, ignored and forgotten,
Creeps her way through the seams.
They split, and it grows,
Like some vicious root that strangles its host.

They pretend not to notice,
They choke. They bleed. They love.
Whilst still she creeps,
And they ignore her.

The small gap she leaves grows,
Stimulated by the intensity of their love.
A crack or two spreads and is nurtured,
Until she becomes that empty hole, dark and cold.

Her roots suck dry the freedom they have left,
She feeds upon their love and their hatred.
She knows how they’ll move,
She knows how they’ll love.

Eventually, the gaping hole is reduced,
The wounds heal and the emptiness fills.
They find ways to love,
But the small scar of that gaping hole is the next crack,
Hiding, waiting to grow, and split along the seams.


drjones

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  • rockinsue
    rockinsueover 4 years ago

    well this is awesome, really well written, now youve really got to do that revision mate lol

  • TrEaSuReDiMaGeS
    TrEaSuReDiMaGeSover 4 years ago

    Beautifully written Daryl!! :-)

  • David Meacham
    David Meachamover 4 years ago

    NIce work Daryl

  • drjones
    drjonesover 4 years ago

    Thanks Sus, Deb and Meach!

  • Leon A.  Walker
    Leon A. Walkerover 4 years ago

    That’s excellent!!! Thank you.

  • drjones
    drjonesover 4 years ago

    Thanks Iawalker

  • invisible
    invisiblealmost 4 years ago

    Powerful and beautiful words ! I like a lot ! thank you Drjones !

  • Thank YOU invisible :)

    – drjones

  • Mel Brackstone.com
    Mel Brackstone...almost 4 years ago

    Oh man, I hope you have more optimism in your life and loves soon, Dar…..this makes me want to weep…

  • thanks halftone, though don’t worry i wrote this 5 years ago and this situation has long been resolved… :)

    – drjones

  • Mel Brackstone.com
    Mel Brackstone...almost 4 years ago

    phew!