I am designing a logo for a compay entitled: Unleashed Retreats. It is centred around nutrition, health and exercise. These are some of the logos, I have played aound with so far.
I think you’ve made a good start here Tom. You’ve used a decent font – nice and light which could easily be associated with health and fitness and I also like the colours you’ve chosen. I have two concerns/thoughts with it as a whole though; firstly I think the ‘un’ is slightly disjointed from the rest of the elements – I read ‘Leashed retreats’. My second thought is that maybe the arrow(s) might be more associated with electronics (play, forward buttons etc.). This might be what you wanted, but does is ‘say’ fitness/health’? (You know what the company is/does, but would someone else?)
If I was to choose my favorite from the four it’d be the bottom right. Like I said; really great start mate, keep up the good work!
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I’d say 1st and 4th based on aesthetics alone.
Okay cool, thanks for your opinion. :)
– Tom Douce
No worries, good luck with it mate.
botom right best i thnk top right the blue is off puting
Botton right.
I think you’ve made a good start here Tom. You’ve used a decent font – nice and light which could easily be associated with health and fitness and I also like the colours you’ve chosen.
I have two concerns/thoughts with it as a whole though; firstly I think the ‘un’ is slightly disjointed from the rest of the elements – I read ‘Leashed retreats’. My second thought is that maybe the arrow(s) might be more associated with electronics (play, forward buttons etc.). This might be what you wanted, but does is ‘say’ fitness/health’? (You know what the company is/does, but would someone else?)
If I was to choose my favorite from the four it’d be the bottom right.
Like I said; really great start mate, keep up the good work!
I’m with Naf on this.