Southern Waking

Were I to catch you sleeping
Lost in your dreams unknown to me
A feathered wisp or gentle breath
Is all it takes to tame your dreams

The southern way of waking
Touching slow that follows the eyes
Brings the slide of warmed honey lips
Of satin-ed skin to bring the fantasy to life

Once you are roused I would purr delight
Feeling the morning kiss, spreading my embrace
Wide my smile from lips slumber plumped
Riotous my mane a sexy mess begging a fingers read

Poised in between the night and morning haze
Momentarily lost but wanting your ultimate capture
I stretch my limbs to embrace my man, awaiting your kisses
Pleasured in thought and embodied in dewy sweetness

Leagues beneath the seducing depths
Dreams personified in her lovely vision laid bare
As beautiful as the waking of a southern morning
As exciting as the breaking of a spirited mare
As meaningful as two whose one love is shared

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Sometimes imagination can be a comforting diversion. I love living and feel blessed to be able to experience life within each day that comes. Grateful I am and thirsty I will always be for more.

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  • JRGarland
    JRGarlandalmost 2 years ago

    I love your Southern waking. It brings such glorious delights to the heart. Awesome write my friend!!!

  • Good morning mountain man. How goes it on that mountain of yours. I can see it is welcoming a beautiful day. Your colors must be peeking through their green veil by now. Thank you.

    – Donna19

  • labaker
    labakeralmost 2 years ago

    The slide of warmed honey lips,a mane begging fingers, leagues beneath the seducing depths, meaningful as two whose one love is shared……….potent, vibrant, erotic and pieced together masterfully.

  • Well thank you my friend who doesn’t realize he is a writer also. I am thinking if I keep writing you will eventually post your words which you keep to yourself. Soon I am hoping. :) Thank you and good morning.

    – Donna19

  • carboneye
    carboneyealmost 2 years ago

    Those lip’s must have been honeyed by potent poetic pollen collected by bewitched bee’s from the luscious garden bed of your heart, their stinger’s subdued in submission to your seductive intent, their honey sacrificed for the sweetness of your lip’s and the word’s that long to pass through them that would then pollinate the heart of another and cause it to beat happily in a renewing of sunlight and the soul of Spring. xox

  • Soul of Spring. Tell me this has to be your next work? How very poetic and simply elegant is your comment. Often I am not sure how to respond because you comment in lyrical prose. I always look forward to what you will pen. It is morning here and always a nice way to begin my day. xxx

    – Donna19

  • Robin Monroe
    Robin Monroealmost 2 years ago

    a beautiful sensual awakening….

  • Good morning and thank you so much Sis. :)

    – Donna19

  • reflector
    reflectoralmost 2 years ago

    Wow! All the Ambulance workers had better be called in to work extra shifts today – all the men who read this will need resuscitation after reading it, including me! :))x An amazing poem that fires up the imagination!

  • Hahaha just making me laugh here. It is early morning here and all the lovely southern bells are awaking from their dreaming. Just be happy your not in the line of fire! :)) xx

    – Donna19

  • reflector
    reflectoralmost 2 years ago

    Carboneye’s on your Wavelength, I can see! :))

  • Maybe because he is a fellow countryman of yours? :))

    – Donna19

  • reflector
    reflectoralmost 2 years ago

    I thought he was American. Anyway, some Aussies regard Perth as another Country! (An Aussie joke, just poking fun at each other). Southern Bells can be amazing. But Beauty has many Post Codes! :))

  • Totally agree with you. Beauty is everywhere. :) Now as to the “dig” at your friend there….I hear he is very passionate about his “country” so careful you don’t wake the dragon…..:)

    – Donna19

  • Guendalyn
    Guendalynalmost 2 years ago

    this is magnific work !!!

  • Celui-ci a été écrit pour les belles dames ici dans le sud profond. Ils sont une race différente et douceur.

    – Donna19

  • Tony Wilder
    Tony Wilderalmost 2 years ago

    Donna I think that is so much more than a Southern waking my friend.
    Pleasured in thought and embodied in dewy sweetness
    I think that is a great line and description!

  • Well thank you friend. You would appreciate these words being the beautiful romantic you are. :)

    – Donna19

  • reflector
    reflectoralmost 2 years ago

    He’s about 5000 kilometers away from here, so I’m not too worried if he gets a Bee in his Bonnet! :)) People who live in Sydney say derogatory things about Melbourne folk, and vice versa. It’s all in the name of fun.

  • Yea I thought you guys were just joking. :))

    – Donna19

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