The Seductive Deep

The night wind reels into my head
There is a call from the ocean
Which can not be ignored
A need for his liquid slide on my skin
My feet give answer to the sand
I invite the freedom of the wind
As a carpet of clothing mark my trail
Near the waters edge my toes drink
Enthusiastic waves glide up my legs
My hair riots in joy down my back
Anticipation builds as the waves seduce
There on the sand and into the ocean
I can hear the surfs song of need
In every vein, in every beat there is life
It waits for me like a joyous lover
I dip my hands into the blue rush
He lovingly takes me into his arms
Lost among the waves that caress
Lost in time where there is only pleasure
The blue overtakes me and feeds
Limp and sedate in its embrace I lose myself
The deep is seductive and wild
A master who cherishes his mate
Far below the blue edge of shore
There is a loving taking place
There is a mermaid ensnared by his passion
Deep I take him into me
Strong and powerful his current builds
Lost there in the deep
Where the only time that exist
is the ticking of the explosion
about to break the surface
Wave after wave erupt
and once again
the ocean carries
me onto the shore

Dhutchins 2…20…12


Donna19

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Just loving me some blue tonight……

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I have written for many years and until recently it has been for my eyes only. I have reached a crossroads in my life where I would like to share my thoughts with you. I hope you enjoy what I have written and can see the true meaning of my work. I believe in the goodness out there and want to encourage what I know exist within all of us.

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  • JRGarland
    JRGarland3 months ago

    Very passionately expressed. Awesome write my dear!!

  • Thank you JR. I appreciate your connection to this. xo

    – Donna19

  • yvonca
    yvonca3 months ago

    gee whiz that’s good. makes me appreciate the ocean a bit. such a landlubber am I , but I love the window to your world here.

  • Why thank you baby girl. This is one of those works that I enjoyed sinking into. xo

    – Donna19

  • Iris  R
    Iris R3 months ago

    I, like yvonca am a landlubber/ afraid of what lays underneath, but it seems to seduce me at times. I felt every word of this and loved the visual.
    Instant favorite.
    Iris

  • Thank you Iris. Appreciated

    – Donna19

  • sure2010
    sure20103 months ago

    Indeed touching the ocean depth…great write Donna…Awesome

  • Thank you Suresh.

    – Donna19

  • Robin Monroe
    Robin Monroe3 months ago

    oh and you do the blue so well, a passionate, sensual write:)

  • Yes….Yes I did. Thank you

    – Donna19

  • Tony Wilder
    Tony Wilder3 months ago

    Deep, dark, mysterious and powerful the ocean makes the perfect lover. This sensuous surrender is wonderfully written. I love how you weave this together giving him life.
    Deep I take him into me
    Strong and powerful his current builds
    Lost there in the deep
    Where the only time that exist
    is the ticking of the explosion
    about to break the surface

  • Well thank you Tony. Good to meet you.

    – Donna19

  • mom23girls
    mom23girls3 months ago

    Fantastic write!!

  • Thank you so much

    – Donna19

  • J Jennelle
    J Jennelle3 months ago

    The beach will never be the same. :)

  • LOL No it will be better! Thank you

    – Donna19

  • TheWanderingBoo
    TheWanderingBoo3 months ago

    wow, beautiful, passionate and sensuous

  • Aww thanks Boo. Glad you liked it.

    – Donna19

  • billfox256
    billfox2563 months ago

    “Women are never stronger than when they arm themselves with their weakness.”
    {Marie de Vichy-Chamrond, Marquise du Deffand}

    A wonderful piece!!! Bill

  • I love this quote. And agree completely Bill. You are the master. Thank you so much.

    – Donna19

  • Men are never sexier than when they pick up a pen and write. Just sayin…

    – Donna19