ohhh snap

I think I’d like to take a seat in your lap in a black dress buttoned up high let the darkness in your eyes wrestle with the darkness in mine feeding you ice cream cake just to get that surprised
look
on
your
face
you know I’d sit tall and eat judgement like it was escargot, boy
full of love like the Pillsbury dough boy
won’t have enough
[‘til
we’re
dead]
if you performed a
break and enter
on my mind
I wonder
if
you’d
find
[what you’re looking for]
if the things I haven’t said would turn your head in my direction or is it all just a hypthothetical illusion a fine tuned micro social scenario like an arcade game and we ran out of
quarters
what
if
I
borrow
some money tonight?
what if its living tomorrow?
what if

[I
want
it
to
be?]


DominicSavio

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Some background to this poem – it’s Valentine’s Day and I’m having a GREAT day! I’ve got the joy of the Lord, I’m treating myself, I’m not thinking about him, it’s all good. And then it all unravels at the end of the night, hence the title lol. Actually I wrote some of this earlier but it came together in a quirky way so I figured I’d run with it. :>

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  • shootback
    shootback4 months ago

    I enjoy all your writings…this one is extra neat, somehow?!

  • ha, thanks dude! this one is super random… i don’t know how i went from cuddling to escargot to video games but I’m glad you liked it :D lol

    – DominicSavio

  • AlteredMind
    AlteredMind4 months ago

    This is a brilliant piece. =) You articulate your thoughts in such a beautiful way. Love the title, love the first part “I think I’d like to take a seat in your lap in a black dress buttoned up high let the darkness in your eyes wrestle with the darkness in mine feeding you ice cream cake just to get that surprised
    look
    on
    your
    face” and I love the mental break and enter part. =) You’re just a great writer! Never stop! =) God bless you!

  • well thanks! you know i love surprising this particular person :> and the title might be more accurate if it said “not thinking of him, not thinking of him, not thinking of him, ohhhh snap” lol. life.

    – DominicSavio

  • Heather King
    Heather King3 months ago

    i am in love with this one

  • thanks so much :D

    – DominicSavio