oh I’d have a treat for you
here
if
your favourite thing
to eat was
mixed
messages,
dear
oh my heart is mischief and poise
so inclined
to cause trouble
forgive me
if
I
dip
my feet in in the rubble
and rummage with grubby hands
and find something
in the past
I’d
like
to
keep.
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Ha! Very cute AND insightful. I like this! Especially the ending :) Great work!
your comment made me laugh somehow! thanks! glad you enjoyed it :>
– DominicSavio
very nice! a fun read but i sense some sadness underneath…..
good guess! that’s how it goes, i like to joke around about the whole situation, but there is a hint of loss beneath that… glad you enjoyed it anyhoo :> have a great day and God bless!
– DominicSavio
Love this one. =) You have such a way with words, it’s incredible. =) God bless you!
“oh I’d have a treat for you
here
if
your favourite thing
to eat was
mixed
messages,
dear”
rotfl. best part right there.
and
what can I do
when i find that it’s
true
that you
have an appetite for confusion? lol… just messin :>
– DominicSavio