It's Valentine's Day and I've got a box full of innuendos just for you

oh I’d have a treat for you
here
if
your favourite thing
to eat was
mixed
messages,
dear
oh my heart is mischief and poise
so inclined
to cause trouble
forgive me
if
I
dip
my feet in in the rubble
and rummage with grubby hands
and find something
in the past
I’d
like
to
keep.


DominicSavio

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  • Katie Leonatti
    Katie Leonatti4 months ago

    Ha! Very cute AND insightful. I like this! Especially the ending :) Great work!

  • your comment made me laugh somehow! thanks! glad you enjoyed it :>

    – DominicSavio

  • greeneyedlady
    greeneyedlady4 months ago

    very nice! a fun read but i sense some sadness underneath…..

  • good guess! that’s how it goes, i like to joke around about the whole situation, but there is a hint of loss beneath that… glad you enjoyed it anyhoo :> have a great day and God bless!

    – DominicSavio

  • AlteredMind
    AlteredMind4 months ago

    Love this one. =) You have such a way with words, it’s incredible. =) God bless you!

    “oh I’d have a treat for you
    here
    if
    your favourite thing
    to eat was
    mixed
    messages,
    dear”

  • rotfl. best part right there.
    and
    what can I do
    when i find that it’s
    true
    that you
    have an appetite for confusion? lol… just messin :>

    – DominicSavio