You don't make sense, why should i?
if i
bathe Your
feet
in
tears
will You call me Mary and
remember my
face?
will you embrace me
if I left
my
limbs
in the past?
can
You
stretch out my love
like
elastic to make it
last?
will
You touch me because i dance?
[am i lego
because You always
take me
apart
and put me back
together
again
but You said
this isn’t a coincidence
when
i begged You
“please
no more coincidences
i just need
to
heal”]
Comments
bull’s eye for me not for the bull I mean
lol. I’m glad we live on the same floor.
– DominicSavio
one of the best i have read in a long time. great job, i can feel the pain woven in your words
thanks a lot Nathan! yeah I think pain is one of those things that doesn’t need to be stated, it simply leaks from your eyes, your metaphors… God bless you :>
– DominicSavio
Week of August 28, 2011
thanks so much for the feature! I’m honored :>
– DominicSavio
Your imagery is always spot on great write..congrats on your features..
thanks so much! good to hear from you :>
– DominicSavio
Very heartfelt, strikes a chord with the reader.
thanks a lot, I’m glad it did :>
– DominicSavio
Your poem has been featured – 18/09/2011:
and see it here on the TBF blog
Congratulations! :-)
hey, thanks again!! have a great week and God bless you :D
– DominicSavio