Something's changed, and I do believe it is me.

Forgive me if
your room is littered with
pieces of me, because I
think I may have
left some
there.


DominicSavio

Something's changed, and I do believe it is me. by

Simply put, this is a poem about the feeling of “unfinished business.”

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  • Unique-Mystique
    Unique-Mystiqueover 1 year ago

    wonderful

  • Thank you :>

    – DominicSavio

  • Arcadia Tempest
    Arcadia Tempestover 1 year ago

    And the scent of what if, what was
    hurtles into the window of time
    to hit me when the morning breaks …

  • wow, is that one of yours? it makes a great follow up :>

    – DominicSavio

  • hollyann
    hollyannover 1 year ago

    wow-fantastic!!

  • thanks for the read Holly, hope you have a great day!

    – DominicSavio

  • Tony Wilder
    Tony Wilderover 1 year ago

    Its amazing how much our being is imprinted on others, not just the physical but also emotional, spiritual, etc. I think especially when there are things we did not finish.

  • Tony Wilder
    Tony Wilderover 1 year ago

    Sorry, hit add too soon. Another insightful write.

  • No problem Tony! And you’re very right; I think everyone you connect with has an impact on you… And certainly in this case, all of those areas were touched. Thanks for your thoughts :>

    – DominicSavio

  • Yvonne Churchley
    Yvonne Churchleyover 1 year ago

    The rooms are the chambers of your heart for there is always a piece even though tiny of the past remaining there….

  • Yes, well said! Thanks for the comment!

    – DominicSavio

  • Charmiene Maxwell-batten
    Charmiene Maxw...over 1 year ago

    amazingly beautifully expressed!

  • Thanks for the read Charmiene :D

    – DominicSavio

  • mordechai
    mordechaiover 1 year ago

    Short and sweet, but mostly sweet.

  • Aw, thanks so much for featuring me! I’m honored!

    – DominicSavio

  • Rickster1
    Rickster1over 1 year ago

    Profoundly left as a lasting moment
    Great mood portrayed
    Rick

  • Thanks Rick! Some things just hold onto your soul like that :> Good to hear from you!

    – DominicSavio

  • unbeknown
    unbeknownover 1 year ago

    Thought inspiring work here, congratulations on your feature :)

  • Thanks, I’m glad it inspired to you! It’s great to have the support of the rb community :D

    – DominicSavio