Busted

Domenica
Author: Domenica
Word Count: 6
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Red light. Floor it! Damn…cops!

Busted

My first attempt at a six word story…This six word story thing is so much harder than I’d imagined!

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Six Words Only
  • Anne van Alkemade

    Anne van AlkemadeWordsmith, 5 months ago

    Seems to me, you’ve got it covered Domenica. Nice one.

  • Lehane

    Lehane, 5 months ago

    Yes, I’d have to say this is one of the better six worders I’ve seen! At least it attempts a story, rather than a simple statement (that seems the norm in this group)

  • CrystalNoellyn

    CrystalNoellyn, 2 months ago

    nice. is this from experiance? lol.

  • Unseen

    Unseen, 2 months ago

    You expressed yourself very well!S

  • SoxyFleming

    SoxyFleming, 2 months ago

    yes I think it’s easy to just put six words together but to actually create movement of time place feeling or activity is the challenge, to put those things in between the 6 words even if you can’t write them, it is hard but you’ve done it

  • smitisan

    smitisan, about 1 month ago

    Yellow light means go faster. What?

  • KEITH  R. WILLIAMS

    KEITH R. WILL..., about 1 month ago

    COOL!!

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