Walls

I built a wall once,
it was wide and tall,
bare hands used, with
boulder, stone and a lime mud paste,
was the shape of an iron horse shoe.
When I climbed atop this wall to see,
power to reign it gave to me,
for land that my eye could see,
I have become master with lock and key.
For my gates are strong,
my pride of place,
makes me the keeper,
of our human race,
to offer shelter,
or turn away.
Add to that the beast at bay,
lure him in, a pet to play,
where I stand so near the sky,
I look down on the meeker man.
Man or beast,
in or out,
the strength it gives,
I feel devout,
this land of mine,
yes, my domain,
enter wisely,
fear
my
name.

  • Mark Ramstead

    Mark Ramstead

    A very MALE poem… ; )

  • dogfish replied

    cheers, hope no one reports me for not being pc!

  • dogpriest

    dogpriest

    well written dog, very strong poem!!

    dogpriest ; )

  • dogfish replied

    the strength lies in the domain, dog

  • dogpriest

    dogpriest

    ha ha, watch yursel,
    wars can start,
    1 million woman stand,
    gonna kill us all,
    in ways,
    sleekit and planned….lol

    dogpriest ; )

  • dogfish replied

    but from my wall
    i can see it all
    when time comes
    the beast will turn!

  • Stuart  Fellowes

    Stuart Fellowes

    Thanks Dogfish. I am not a poetry fan but this piece struck a bell with me. I shall be contemplating it for some time.

  • dogfish replied

    thank you, your response humbles me.

  • cougarfan

    cougarfan

  • dogfish replied

    Gobsmacked!!!

    thanks so much. :-}

  • cougarfan

    cougarfan

    You Are Soooooooo Welcome!!!!!!! Well Deserved:)
    xoxox

  • dogfish replied

    ;)

  • Sheila Laurens

    Sheila Laurens

    This is excellent, such powerful words and sentiment. No kidding, I haven’t read anything for a long time (including my own!) that has stirred me quite so much as this. Thanks wow

  • dogfish replied

    wow, again I am humbled, I wrote this to show strength of character and yet I am humbled by your response, I thank you for reading it.
    now I look forward to reading some of your words! :-}

  • Sheila Laurens

    Sheila Laurens

    I haven’t written for a very long time and it was mostly rubbish. I would never have called myself a poet!
    After reading your words, I think mine will stay filed away, never to see the light of day!

  • dogfish replied

    now thats a bit harsh, considering that prior to joining the bubble the only thing I had ever written was a shopping list for the kids! hmph, go figure!
    now you really do need to go dust yer writings and revisit them, then allow others to read!

  • Sheila Laurens

    Sheila Laurens

    Congratulations on your features – brilliant x

  • dogfish replied

    thanks very much!

  • hsien-ku

    hsien-ku

    i built a wall once too
    but it didn’t work very well
    loved your poem!

  • dogfish replied

    thanks so much! if your wall stood for a measure of time, then it done it’s purpose!
    :-}

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