Walls
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! 100% !, ***♂♥♥QUORN♥♥♀, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Behind the Mask, Everyday Life, Freedom In Words & Art, Scotlands History, The Scots are Coming, The Sensual Word, United Kingdom, Untouchables, Up & Coming Writers and Villains and Villainesses: The darker side...I built a wall once,
it was wide and tall,
bare hands used, with
boulder, stone and a lime mud paste,
was the shape of an iron horse shoe.
When I climbed atop this wall to see,
power to reign it gave to me,
for land that my eye could see,
I have become master with lock and key.
For my gates are strong,
my pride of place,
makes me the keeper,
of our human race,
to offer shelter,
or turn away.
Add to that the beast at bay,
lure him in, a pet to play,
where I stand so near the sky,
I look down on the meeker man.
Man or beast,
in or out,
the strength it gives,
I feel devout,
this land of mine,
yes, my domain,
enter wisely,
fear
my
name.
Mark Ramstead
A very MALE poem… ; )
dogfish replied
cheers, hope no one reports me for not being pc!
dogpriest
well written dog, very strong poem!!
dogpriest ; )
dogfish replied
the strength lies in the domain, dog
dogpriest
ha ha, watch yursel,
wars can start,
1 million woman stand,
gonna kill us all,
in ways,
sleekit and planned….lol
dogpriest ; )
dogfish replied
but from my wall
i can see it all
when time comes
the beast will turn!
Stuart Fellowes
Thanks Dogfish. I am not a poetry fan but this piece struck a bell with me. I shall be contemplating it for some time.
dogfish replied
thank you, your response humbles me.
cougarfan
dogfish replied
Gobsmacked!!!
thanks so much. :-}
cougarfan
You Are Soooooooo Welcome!!!!!!! Well Deserved:)
xoxox
dogfish replied
;)
Sheila Laurens
This is excellent, such powerful words and sentiment. No kidding, I haven’t read anything for a long time (including my own!) that has stirred me quite so much as this. Thanks wow
dogfish replied
wow, again I am humbled, I wrote this to show strength of character and yet I am humbled by your response, I thank you for reading it.
now I look forward to reading some of your words! :-}
Sheila Laurens
I haven’t written for a very long time and it was mostly rubbish. I would never have called myself a poet!
After reading your words, I think mine will stay filed away, never to see the light of day!
dogfish replied
now thats a bit harsh, considering that prior to joining the bubble the only thing I had ever written was a shopping list for the kids! hmph, go figure!
now you really do need to go dust yer writings and revisit them, then allow others to read!
Sheila Laurens
Congratulations on your features – brilliant x
dogfish replied
thanks very much!
hsien-ku
i built a wall once too
but it didn’t work very well
loved your poem!
dogfish replied
thanks so much! if your wall stood for a measure of time, then it done it’s purpose!
:-}