I scream!
I smile!
the world,
defiled.
relief I seek,
for a while,
blood pours,
behind closed doors.
if blood you seekthen i must runfor sucking bloodaint my fun!
when blood is soughtyou must runfor suckling on bloodhas got to be done
You scream!
a dream.
behind closed doors,
blood drains the weak
great poem dogfish, I tried to reverse it and do it anal style, but it didn’t work.out so hot… ah well…
beginning now to see your trail of thought jbthanks
i like this, few words, but fucking awesome
as i say a wordsmith i am not,
but i know how to say thanks.cheers
Less is More – ace mate !
I felt every word – with my heart
not many people see or feel the relief, only the special people. :-}
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abeigh
if blood you seek
then i must run
for sucking blood
aint my fun!
dogfish replied
when blood is sought
you must run
for suckling on blood
has got to be done
JenniferB
I smile!
You scream!
the world,
a dream.
for a while,
relief I seek,
behind closed doors,
blood drains the weak
great poem dogfish, I tried to reverse it and do it anal style, but it didn’t work.out so hot… ah well…
dogfish replied
beginning now to see your trail of thought jb
thanks
dogpriest
i like this, few words, but fucking awesome
dogfish replied
as i say a wordsmith i am not,
but i know how to say thanks.
cheers
Sheila Laurens
Less is More – ace mate !
Sheila Laurens
I felt every word – with my heart
dogfish replied
not many people see or feel the relief, only the special people. :-}