Special Person

I know You’re feeling lonely,
Lonely and afraid,
You’re thinking of the hurt and all the pain,
Your mind is full of fears
And as you wipe away the tears,
You recall those lost and empty wasted years.

You feel that no one cares
If you live or if you die.
And so you sit alone in misery.
You bow your head and cry,
And you ask the questions why?
How can anybody know the way I feel?

But you’re a very special person,
And I care for you,
I want to be a part of everything you do,
I want to take your burdens
And I long to set you free.
My heart is really aching for you to turn to me.

I wish that you could understand,
I know the way you feel,
But I can’t help you if you think that I’m not real.
I gave my life to save you
Two thousand years ago.
It hurts when you reject me
More than you’ll ever know.

You are a very special person,
And I care for you,
I want to be a part of everything you do,
I want to take your burdens
And I long to set you free.
My heart is really aching for you to turn to me.

So come to me, I love you,
And I’ll set you free,
I will take your burdens,
I wish that you could see,
I will never leave you,
I want to be your Friend.
I’ll give you all you’ll ever need,
On me you can depend.

  • Susan King

    Susan King

    nice words, well done

  • Dave Law replied

    Thanks so much Susan.

  • Ellen

    Ellen

    Very beautiful written!

  • Dave Law replied

    Thank you Ellen.

  • Tiamaria

    Tiamaria

    Your words are special! Well done!

  • Dave Law replied

    Thank you Teresa as usual your comments mean a lot. :D

  • krafty

    krafty

    Soooooo gorgeous..you are indeed a multitalented Soul..Bravo Dave…Bravo!!

  • Dave Law replied

    Thank you Cynthis I appreciate you taking time to read my work.

  • Bev Woodman

    Bev Woodman

    Thanks Dave – that was beautiful and so touching

  • Dave Law replied

    Thank you Bev, I appreciate your comments.

  • juice

    juice

    a gorgeous favourite of mine…your writing style is so flowing, beautiful and emotive…I can feel so much from this…thank you for sharing this amazing piece with us

  • Jennifer Darrow
  • Dave Law replied

    Thank you for reading this and your comment.

  • Alexandra Jack

    Alexandra Jack

    This poem really speaks to my heart it describes how I have felt in the past and how I sometimes feel now and it has done me good to hear that I am a special person and that
    God cares for me and wants to take my burdens and set me free. I have forgotten about this it is though God is speaking to me through this poem. No it is not as though he is speaking to me, He is speaking to me. Thanks for that encouragement

  • Dave Law replied

    Thank you for reading this, I am so pleased that it has helped you.
    I assure you you are precious and special. He is always there for you even when you don’t feel He is, trust in His Word that He has promised never to leave you and will be with you always to the very end of the age (Matthew 28:20).

  • DePaul

    DePaul

    Amidst the chaos of everyday lives, is one solid truth. That truth WILL set you free, all you need is to seek, accept and believe. Thank you Dave for beautiful truths that will undoubtedly impact on lives – especially those we love. (John 8:32 )

  • Dave Law replied

    Thank you DePaul, these comments mean a lot to me.

  • Elenne Boothe

    Elenne Boothe

    Wow! You touch my heart with your writings, thank you for this one.
    I saw yself in here but I thank God for saving me and giving me some true friends on here
    because the one I use to have when I was working for you know who no long are my friend.
    Thank you Dave again for this

  • Dave Law replied

    Thank you Elenne, I am sorry my reply is so late.

  • Globalphotos

    Globalphotos

    Beautiful work !!

  • Dave Law replied

    Thank you Varinia

  • Pat Moore

    Pat Moore

    Excellent writing and very true, thanks for sharing!!

  • Dave Law replied

    Thank you Pat

  • Dawne Olson

    Dawne Olson

    Something weird going on today… every work I click on keeps leading me to this message. I looked at a horse and rainbow and there He was. I looked for Algonquin and found this…so here He is again. I swear I’m not TRYING to find messages from God. I just wanted to enjoy some beautiful art. And everywhere I turn today… I run smack into Him. These words make me feel ‘cornered’ but… maybe its time.

  • Dave Law replied

    Thank you for all your comments, He is always there waiting. Bless you. :)

  • terezadelpilar

    terezadelpilar

    You are a Great Poet Dave, oh yes you are:) This is beautiful, really beautiful.

  • Dave Law replied

    Thank you Trezadelpilar

  • Wayne Cook

    Wayne Cook

    Dave…we think a lot alike….I could see myself so vividly in those lines…my gosh…..I know that He cares even more that I can…very touching, brother…very touching…

  • Dave Law replied

    He does, Wayne, and is always wanting to encourage and bless.

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