My Best Part

Daniel Doyle
Author: Daniel Doyle
Word Count: 161
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My Best Part

My Best Part

Gently grasping one another’s heart,
knowing when perfect love starts.
Deep love living within their dreams,
magical moments appears as it seems.
Excitement of togetherness they share,
sweet moments of love they are aware.
Together is the best way to survive,
to only giving up their lonely lives.
So much strong affection they carry,
well within their hearts to marry.
Recklessness of willed life lives strong,
their endless love goes on and on.
Soft tenderness of love is pulling them together,
she welcomes him in her heart forever.
Lonely old boring life she’s willing to miss,
every day she looks forward to a sweet tender kiss.
She only wants what best to be,
life’s pure happiness for her and me.
Our hearts embrace love in pure harmony,
impatient to share love eternally.
Pushing our eternal love to a test,
cherishing moments of love at their best.
Without any doubt what’s in my heart,
you My Best Part.

  • Rebecca Brann

    Rebecca Brann

    Beautiful!

  • Daniel Doyle replied

    Thank You Rebecca, I will try to post more writtings but my passion is photography, so thanks for visiting and hope to see you again, LOL…........;0)

  • Jay Ryser

    Jay Ryser

    Great work

  • Daniel Doyle replied

    Thanks Jay, thanks for the visit, hope to see you again.

  • Kimberley Davitt

    Kimberley Davitt

    sweet! lovely!

  • Daniel Doyle replied

    Thank You Kim, thanks for visiting, LOL…........;0)

  • Rosalie Scanlon

    Rosalie Scanlon

    Very nice work.

  • Daniel Doyle replied

    Thank You Rosalie, hope to see you again, LOL…........;0)

  • loramae

    loramae

    Sounds like two hearts have been richly blessed ! Tender, sweet words! =)

  • Daniel Doyle replied

    Yes our hearts just get more and more blessed everyday, thank you lora Mae, LOL….............. ;0)

  • Del Millar

    Del Millar

    a sincere, touching and beautiful piece Daniel, you dear man

  • Daniel Doyle replied

    Sorry for the late reply, anyway Thank You Del, hope to see you again, LOL…….....;0)

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