The witness

The air was thick and humid,
A black and starry night..
The clouds had not returned since winter,
The summer it was dry.
We sat together by the rug,
Shadows caught in candlelight…
We watched him watching us,
The suspension reached its height.
She leaned in closer and took in my form,
Her eyes gleaming with lust.
She kissed my lips,
Grabbed my hips,
Purring, asking if I liked this…
Her slender fingers electric ,
And magic on my skin…
I couldnt help but let out a gasp,
As she slid that magic in…
With her free hand she fumbled,
Ripping free my clothes,
Telling me how good it was,
To hear her woman moan…
She knew that she had me,
So completely under her spell,
Was aware she could do anything,
That she did so well…
She paused in her motion,
and threw Him a glance,
I could see he was excited,
And somewhat in a trance…
Her hair fell down around her face,
And brushed against my skin,
Hand cupping my tender breasts,
She slid that magic in…
And as she moved down lower,
Her breath slowed to a pace…
That sensual tongue,
And all her tricks,
Put any man to disgrace.
And then I remembered…
We had a witness to our display,
He still stood there watching,
Waiting for our say…
Silently begging for that chance
To come over and play….
Would it be today…


dimarie

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My name’s dimarie,
My art enterprise is called ‘dimarie designs’ and I’m also the artist behind Darkened Mystery Artworks

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I’m an artist, a poet, a proud mumma, a hopeless romantic, an optimistic pessimist, a piscean, a writer, a lover of all things deep and beautiful.
I’m just a creative soul…

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Comments

  • Jaybe
    Jaybeover 3 years ago

    Well hell……would asking for a part 3 sound greedy? LMAO……your writing is awesome hun….so glad you’re sharing it. xox

  • greedy can be good sometimes lol…
    Thanx heaps hey… wasnt sure how these ones would go down…but i’m so over caring what people think about me lately… so i thought may as well be me… xoxox

    – dimarie

  • HeatherTS
    HeatherTSover 3 years ago

    weeee! hoorah! now maybe put this in Blue Room

  • Thanx darlin!
    I’ll do that! thanx for the idea! x0x0x

    – dimarie

  • Jaybe
    Jaybeover 3 years ago

    So what was the inspiration? A dream? What? LOL

  • a memory :)

    – dimarie

  • Mark Ramstead
    Mark Ramsteadover 3 years ago

    A memory… good times.

  • well…not a straight memory, more of a collection of memory…if that makes sense.. :)
    But yes…all good memories these ones! :)

    – dimarie

  • headfux
    headfuxover 3 years ago

    very nice bit of writing there Jodi!

  • Thanxs chicky!
    Much appreciated! :)
    So happy you like!:)

    – dimarie

  • Damien Venditti
    Damien Vendittiover 3 years ago

    good lord dee … this is great !!!!!

  • Thankyou! :)
    So happy you liked it!
    :) :) :)
    there are others, if you like this sort of writing
    (i know you do lol)

    – dimarie

  • C J Lewis
    C J Lewisover 3 years ago

    Excellent writing Jodi…had me on that little sojourn…lol.

  • Thanx Chris!
    Hope it was a pleasure! :)
    much appreciated!

    – dimarie

  • C J Lewis
    C J Lewisover 3 years ago

    Yes, thanks :)

  • VelvetGirl
    VelvetGirlover 3 years ago

    I like. Very sensual indeed.

  • Dwayne Boyd
    Dwayne Boydover 3 years ago

    Oh, I am reading this on a lunch break at work. It makes me feel like I’ve seen something I shouldn’t. I guess that makes it a guilty pleasure. Thanks for sharing.