Sssh!
She whispered lightly,
A giggle on her tender lips,
Her eyes were filled with mischief,
As the girl sashayed her slender hips.
She walked on up ahead,
And turned back to look at me,
She licked her lips all sensual like,
Smiled and casually…
Her fingers let the fabric slide,
Falling from her naked skin,
Unveiling her shimmering pale form,
That had that night..
..Been clothed within…
And as she took me by the hand,
And led me down the hall,
Her rhythm was enticing and left me wanting more.
Her skin static to the touch,
Sending shivers down my spine,
Heart was beating rapidly,
At the thought she could be mine.
We found oursleves in a darkened room,
Unfamiliar in its effects,
Plushly furnished and deserted,
It was the perfect nest.
Her limbs were shaking slightly,
Her eyes sparkled in the night,
Her hushed excitement rivalled,
My own ravenous appetite.
I gave myself over…
Surrendering to her will I sighed,
As her caress grew more passionate,
I knew I needed her inside.
Her skin was so soft,
Her scent wet and sweet and ripe,
My heart was aloft,
As I gripped her hair tight.
She parted my thighs,
And tasted within…
And the whole world exploded,
Senses overloaded,
Moaning in pleasure,
Our surroundings eroded…
My mind ticked on over…
Who was this pale girl,
With her tricks of the flesh..
Her flickering tongue,
And full sensual breasts,
Her heat it was so…
Took a life on its own…
And under her spell I knew I was home.
We stayed in the darkness…
In a lust filled embrace…
Our limbs interwined…
She was all I could taste…
Jaybe, 2 months ago
Well…...WOW…..hun, that is incredible…..and I love it…instant fave for me, without a doubt. xox
dimarie in reply to Jaybe’s comment, 2 months ago
Thanx sweety! :)
Very much appreciated!
It isnt really finished lol…there was heaps more, but i thought it was abit too long so i left it at this…
colorblind, 2 months ago
NOW THATS WHAT I CALL
A LOVELY NIGHT
love your wording
i saw the imagery so clearly
lovely work
just keep bringing the poetry
how long have you been writing …
Damien Venditti, 2 months ago
“We stayed in the darkness…
In a lust filled embrace…
Our limbs interwined…
She was all I could taste…”
damn … i think were gonna need part two of this one : ))
dimarie in reply to colorblind’s comment, 2 months ago
Thanx mate!
So glad you like! :)
I’ve been writing my whole life lol…but only recently have been allowing others to see it…
dimarie in reply to Damien Venditti’s comment, 2 months ago
Aw thanx Trippa…Really?
Well…if you ask nicely enough lol…
Damien Venditti, 2 months ago
i already can’t sleep … now you got me thinkin … please : ))
MtnMan, 2 months ago
Bimarie…. ; )
dimarie in reply to Damien Venditti’s comment, 2 months ago
the other part to this i’m not entirely happy with yet so i’m gonna mess with it some more…but i did add another of my naughtier poems for ya to read :)
dimarie in reply to MtnMan’s comment, 2 months ago
Cheeky! lol…
MtnMan, 2 months ago
Yes I am that…( But you are beyond cheeky ) ; )
Tahnja, 2 months ago
geesh, what a brilliant woman you are. Superb poetry and…ok…I’m shaking my head to remove the imagery from me mind, especially when my man isn’t here…rofl…..(oh I didn’t say that!) LOL
C J Lewis, 2 months ago
Free flowing excellent writing Jodi :)
dimarie in reply to Tahnja’s comment, 2 months ago
Aw thanx hon! you’re so sweet! :)
glad you enjoyed it! :)
dimarie in reply to C J Lewis’s comment, 2 months ago
Thanx Chris!
Thought it was time to put up some of my ‘not sad’ writings lol…
Larasolnishko, about 1 month ago
beautiful
dimarie in reply to Larasolnishko’s comment, about 1 month ago
Thanx Larasolnishko,
So glad you like this!
I am planning on doing more of these ones, as i seem to of lost my old diaries that were full of them lol… i went thru a stage where all my art and writings were ‘naughty in nature’ lol, i could never post the artwork here tho, too hentai-ish :)