Look for me where I should not be

Pieces of me
tangled
with pieces of you.
The smell of your skin
still lingers
on mine.

I close my eyes
and I can still
hear you.
I feel
your hot breath
on me.

One time.
And I said
never again.
But now I need you
to find your way
back to me.

Listen.
Follow my heartbeat.
Look for me in the places
that I should not be.
I need you
to exist with me again.
Quietly.

We lay in the bathtub.
Drops of water through our fingers.
Petals from the roses
you gave me
danced around our nakedness.
The heat from our bodies
so close together,
rising from the water’s surface.

I was seduced
by how well you knew me.
By how well you knew
my body.
And oddly,
I felt comforted by it.

Now I walk naked,
through the frozen snow.
Searching for you.
I need you to warm me.

Take the bitter
from my mouth,
and drink me sweet again.
My mind races with fever.
The black night is endless.

The cold air
rushes against my body.
And I gasp.
Slowly,
I close my eyes
and give in to sleep.
Waiting for you
to find me.

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Comments

  • bron stadheim
    bron stadheimover 4 years ago

    powerful and honest! thanks for sharing

  • thank you! :))
    although, I’m not sure about the honest part……..it’s just a little “creative” writing……;)
    -Luisa

    – diLuisa Photography

  • oh, I forgot to mention…..I went through your portfolio earlier on……and your work is awesome!! :)) I didn’t have time to favourite and comment…….but I will……..;)

    – diLuisa Photography

  • aaeiinnn
    aaeiinnnover 4 years ago

    creativity is only as good as the inner self
    your inner self is awesome
    i love this
    xx annie

  • thank you darling annie……you are always so beautiful to me…….xxx

    – diLuisa Photography

  • vampvamp
    vampvampover 4 years ago

    awww…..

  • ;))))) xxx

    – diLuisa Photography

  • AnniG
    AnniGover 4 years ago

    AmaZing! love it, love it!

    “Follow my heartbeat.
    Look for me in the places
    that I should not be”

    A brilliant write!
    xx

  • thank you my darling one! :))

    – diLuisa Photography

  • P.S They are my favourite lines too!! :))))

    – diLuisa Photography

  • Aurora Pintore
    Aurora Pintoreover 4 years ago

    beautiful !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • grazie tesoro!!!!

    – diLuisa Photography

  • G .
    G .over 4 years ago

    Great feel to this.. love how it flows..

  • thank you so much!! :))
    -Luisa

    – diLuisa Photography

  • Marjorie Wallace
    Marjorie Wallaceover 4 years ago

    So beautiful and poigniant! I just love it!

  • oh thank you!! that makes me really happy! :))
    -Luisa

    – diLuisa Photography

  • Greta  McLaughlin
    Greta McLaughlinover 4 years ago

    Beautiful delicate piece of writing!!!

  • darling Greta…..thank you……..xx

    – diLuisa Photography

  • Trenchtownrock
    Trenchtownrockover 4 years ago

    You write with every ounce of emotions you can find in your soul..this is why I love your work so much..it is filled with life and soul and it makes the heart sings while reading..truly wonderful writing Luisa…

  • you make me smile…….and then blush……and then sigh……and then smile again………xxxx

    – diLuisa Photography

  • RaOrEmraeh
    RaOrEmraehover 4 years ago

    Left me with goosebumps.

  • I hope that’s good……….:))) thank you……xxx

    – diLuisa Photography

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