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in the morning fog

racing and rushing
in the morning fog.
we bumped shoulders
and stopped.

without thinking,
I spoke to you
in our language.
without thinking,
you responded….
in our language.

we stood still.
the world in movement
blurred around us.
our mouths not moving.
our eyes in conversation.

a random moment
in universal time
had become
our moment
for all of time.

you heard this thought
in my head
and nodded slowly.
I smiled.
we walked away.
hearts
thumping and pounding.

I turned around.
my breath held.
you were there waiting.
you knew I would.

you put your hand
to your heart
and pretended to fall backwards,
imitating being struck
by Cupid’s arrow.
you smiled
when I laughed
behind my hand.

you winked
and I waved.
we mouthed our goodbyes
like lovers do,
and we disappeared
into the blurry,
moving
fog.

but I know
that you are still thinking
about our moment in Time
too.

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Featured in The Feminine Intent
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inspired by this morning
……………….and by him.

Thank you to those of you who favourite my work or leave a comment. Your appreciation of what I do means so much to me.
~Luisa

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Comments

  • Danica Radman
    Danica Radmanover 4 years ago

    beautiful, cara mia

  • bisous trésor……

    – diLuisa Photography

  • Trenchtownrock
    Trenchtownrockover 4 years ago

    oh my..I wanted this piece to continue flowing..what a gorgeous write my lady..so romantic and soft..I love those moments..moments that you know are just moments passing by to make you smile..thank you for writing this.

  • you already know that i love and live for these moments too………xxx

    – diLuisa Photography

  • Danceintherain
    Danceintherainover 4 years ago

    Very romantic …

    • Coy
  • two italians, a foggy winter’s morning, a busy road in a foreign city………a little romance was bound to happen……….we had the right ingredients. :))
    xx

    – diLuisa Photography

  • sandra22
    sandra22over 4 years ago

    oooh love those moments!
    A romantic romp through the senses…lovely
    sandra

  • thanks Sandra……i love those moments too………. :))
    L xx

    – diLuisa Photography

  • Farfarm
    Farfarmover 4 years ago

    Really touching poetry :)) … and i am just a simple photographer who understood :)

  • hehehe………well then it must be good………:))
    thank you…..xxxx

    – diLuisa Photography

  • Bobby Dar
    Bobby Darover 4 years ago

    very nice job

  • thank you…..:))

    – diLuisa Photography

  • A-New-Start
    A-New-Startover 4 years ago

    I love this and then seeing trenchtownrock’s avatar while scrolling down to comment made me think that person caught that kiss …. ;) :) :) …. Reminds me so much of that saying … You had me at hello :) :) Beautiful write!!!!!!!:) :) xoxoxoxox

  • raymondoantonio
    raymondoantonioover 4 years ago

    WHAT A WONDERFUL ROMANTIC MOMENT LUISA!! BELLISSIMO!! XO

  • Cosimo Piro
    Cosimo Piroover 4 years ago

    a moment in Heaven……eyes in conversation…..bellisima!! The scene just floated by to catch its ambience. xoxo

  • JaneCSolomon
    JaneCSolomonover 4 years ago

    who needs too many words….those eye conversations can say it all. xx

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