The Butterfly Effect
One of my entries into “In the Moment”
Beating wings
upon the air
move molecules, atoms
everywhere
Around the world
the movement goes
and bounces, bumps
until we see
a storm of such intensity.
The Butterfly Effect
One of my entries into “In the Moment”
Beating wings
upon the air
move molecules, atoms
everywhere
Around the world
the movement goes
and bounces, bumps
until we see
a storm of such intensity.
mlgkats
very nice , well written
StacyLee
Very well written! I love the tone and flow to this poem
Christina Martin
well done deri
EaglesWing
(applause))
Dave Sandersfeld
This is special and so profound too! very well done Deri!
Robyn Lakeman
Just wonderful Deri
Dorothy Venter
The poem is delicate and light as the butterfly itself.
Very good.
lensman
And that, in a nutshell, is what it amounts to. Nicely put, Deri.
Deri Dority
Thanks so much for the comments everyone. I had originally written this poem to go along with my entry to the “Butterfly Effect” Challenge Cafe Contest. I put it in my diary and forgot to upload it.
amarica
I love the Butterfly effect theory…though I do believe it is overexcagerated.
Love your poem Hun…xxxxxx