The Butterfly Effect
Beating wings
upon the air
move molecules, atoms
everywhere
Around the world
the movement goes
and bounces, bumps
until we see
a storm of such intensity.
Beating wings
upon the air
move molecules, atoms
everywhere
Around the world
the movement goes
and bounces, bumps
until we see
a storm of such intensity.
Comments
very nice , well written
Very well written! I love the tone and flow to this poem
well done deri
(applause))
This is special and so profound too! very well done Deri!
Just wonderful Deri
The poem is delicate and light as the butterfly itself.
Very good.
And that, in a nutshell, is what it amounts to. Nicely put, Deri.
Thanks so much for the comments everyone. I had originally written this poem to go along with my entry to the “Butterfly Effect” Challenge Cafe Contest. I put it in my diary and forgot to upload it.
I love the Butterfly effect theory…though I do believe it is overexcagerated.
Love your poem Hun…xxxxxx