Beating wings
upon the air
move molecules, atoms
everywhere
Around the world
the movement goes
and bounces, bumps
until we see
a storm of such intensity.
The Butterfly Effect
One of my entries into “In the Moment”
The Butterfly Effect
Beating wings
upon the air
move molecules, atoms
everywhere
Around the world
the movement goes
and bounces, bumps
until we see
a storm of such intensity.
One of my entries into “In the Moment”
mlgkats, 6 months ago
very nice , well written
StacyLee, 6 months ago
Very well written! I love the tone and flow to this poem
Christina Martin, 6 months ago
well done deri
Nicole Ramirez, 6 months ago
(applause))
Dave Sandersfeld, 6 months ago
This is special and so profound too! very well done Deri!
Rivergirl, 6 months ago
Just wonderful Deri
Dorothy Venter, 6 months ago
The poem is delicate and light as the butterfly itself.
Very good.
lensman, 6 months ago
And that, in a nutshell, is what it amounts to. Nicely put, Deri.
Deri Dority, 6 months ago
Thanks so much for the comments everyone. I had originally written this poem to go along with my entry to the “Butterfly Effect” Challenge Cafe Contest. I put it in my diary and forgot to upload it.