4 IT

D. AMO
Author: D. AMO
Word Count: 70
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4 IT

Nope, not gonna mention it.
It… that’s taken 1/2 of my life.
With a flik, it moved me quite a bit.
It, that made me slow, and thin,
filled with sorrow within,
It, that in my life is so real,
not so sensible, and
why I feel so terrible.
It, that I didn’t commit.
It, that no-one wants to admit.
It, that my head, it hit.

  • Riyllan

    Riyllan

    Very good :-)

  • D. AMO

    D. AMO

    Well…Thank-U. even tho it twasn’t?!

  • binjy

    binjy

    :) quirky!

  • D. AMO

    D. AMO

    Good! Great word…Further enlightenment on “IT”. You got me to look up “quirky” ! and my Random house showed up better! than online rhyme*one dictionary! The joys of life and words! Thanking you!

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