Into mystic, on divine thought.

Take my naked shoulder – pull me to your solitude
that I explore my solitude; with you
in your retreat;

and in our solitudes
mine and yours
know my life blood
and for I to know yours
that we not fall to our defeat;

but in our solitudes combined
find our known emotions drifting
lost among confusion
caught to limiting
inhibition
now to meet;

for in the healing space of solitudes
I shall touch your naked shoulder
pull you to my nakedness; in our retreat
that our life blood known, rises
runs together
and runs free.

  • devotee1

    devotee1

    Lovely, Del! Best is everything when enjoyed in pure state. xox

  • Del Millar replied

    Thank you Joe oxo

  • TheWanderingBoo

    TheWanderingBoo

    beautiful words

  • Del Millar replied

    Thank you Simon oxo

  • Christie  Moses

    Christie Moses

    Just simply exquisite Del. Truly a beautiful soft elegance that mirrors your soul xoxo

  • Del Millar replied

    Thank you Christie
    lovely, glad you like oxo

  • erich biemer

    erich biemer

    beautifully told…..

  • Del Millar replied

    Thank you Erich
    oxo

  • ArcadiaTempest

    ArcadiaTempest

    Del this is rich in depth and sincerity…deeper into the blue this write goes me thinks…XX

  • Del Millar replied

    Thank you KarenSue
    lovely way with words you have
    oxo

  • ShadowDancer

    ShadowDancer

    del, this is so romantic and uplifting, such a picture of what is needed in a relationship for growth and longevity.

  • Del Millar replied

    Thank you Patty Jo
    growth is important yes
    lasting is life-treasure
    oxo

  • Coronus

    Coronus

    Healing love during times of retreat/lonliness and solitude. Beautifully woven with such tnederness.

  • Del Millar replied

    Thank you Jono oxo

  • RosaCobos

    RosaCobos

    I feel my mouth filled with “solitudes”
    And the more I hear these singing in my ears,
    the more I feel accompanied.
    Yes….respectful uniqueness…that is what you see.
    Shinning like a seed…
    and containing all the souls of the Universe.
    I…sometimes when I read such beautiful things about love and life, I feel like a little child wishing that….”my dreams become true”. So I guess, that thoughts are tremendous…energetic and real tools of Creation. Verb is the writing of them, and so, hearing you…I trust in ourselves… human beings.
    Rosa

  • RosaCobos

    RosaCobos

    Would be honored if you would join and post into Nirvana. Love your mind-heart. And your way of writing it out.
    Rosa

  • Del Millar replied

    Thank you Rosa, I have now joined Nirvana.
    Thank you also for your lovely comment, I appreciate.
    Kind wishes
    Del

  • RosaCobos

    RosaCobos

    Because never we coud have felt so close linked the nakedness and the solitude…in perfect searching love… this poem so well deserves it.
    Rosa

  • Del Millar replied

    Thank you Rosa, I much appreciate you.
    Thank you for featuring this poem in Nirvana oxo

  • RosaCobos

    RosaCobos

    You are much wellcome It was a pleasure.
    We are now for voting in the Challenge….the moment you please.
    Thank you Del.
    Rosa

  • JaneSolomon

    JaneSolomon

    Oh so beautifully said Del! xxx

  • Del Millar replied

    Thank you darlin oxo

  • Mariska

    Mariska

    Del an enchanting and stylistic work; a pleasure to read…

  • Del Millar replied

    Thank you Mariska, I appreciate you comment
    oxo

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