with your hand print bruise around my neck
my family is concerned about me.
little do they know, that it is my craving
that brings your hands choke me to the point of bruising.
if they could only see up my skirt, my father would clean his gun
when i look up my skirt, it makes me want you more.
Roy barry, 4 months ago
very very dark and brooding.
Powerful too…....
oliver berlin, 4 months ago
D.L.M.B!!!!
Darkmonkey, 4 months ago
Powerful stuff DeEtta….
karldenton, 4 months ago
Very dark and powerful!
mister khan, 4 months ago
oh.
Kristy Lee, 4 months ago
i don’t know you..but I think I love you!! :)))
DeEtta Brown in reply to Kristy Lee’s comment, 4 months ago
hehehehe….hurray!!!
Ash rebeltherace, 3 months ago
so.. deep
written so well with so few words
well done
dogfish, about 1 month ago
certainly paints a vivid picture