DeEtta Brown

The Eager Virgin

I love kisses.
Do you love kisses?
Here are my lips.
Wanna make them plump?

I love love.
Do you like love?
Here’s my heart.
Wanna make it stop?

I love cherries.
Do you like cherries?
Here’s mine.
Wanna make it pop?

  • ozjami

    ozjami, 4 months ago

    LOL brillant writing !!

  • mychaelalchemy

    mychaelalchemy, 4 months ago

    hmmm, kisses. lips, plump… sounds good so far
    I loved the idea of love too, but love isn’t always the answer by itself.
    love shouldn’t make your heart stop, it should make it want to spark….
    I’m not too fond of cherries
    but since you called this “eager Virgin” I do know what you imply….
    once upon an ancient time Virgin meant something different than it does now, it meant simply a maiden who had not bore offspring yet, but being that kind of virginal did not mean there wasn’t any sex or popping the cherry as it means now…
    nonetheless, the sentiment of the poem is very well exacted.
    I even used it similarly in a poem I wrote…..

  • karldenton

    karldenton, 4 months ago

    DeEtta, I am not one to over analyze so I just like it!

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DeEtta Brown

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DeEtta Brown
March 23, 2008