Passion of Love: Part one PG-13
This is for all my Fans of my Fan Fic who have read “Daddy’s Little Girl” And have been begging me to finish it , Well I am working on that fitting it in with all the other things I need to do. Mean while, This story is How Sash Lynn Grey came to be. And other stuff too.

For those who don’t know Jean Grey this is a beautiful darwing by Junior. Please take the time to visit his wonderful works. Junior Mclean
TOUCH TOUCH
the scent was fire
burning skin
touch….touch
burning within
he wants her
will she submit
she wonders
is she ready to commit
touch touch
they can take no more
blazing flames
they lie on the floor
legs upon legs
hands upon hands
love being made
by woman and man
touch touch
another time around
moaning moaning
the only sound
scratching nails
unrelenting kisses
uncontrolled
burning lips
the scent was fire
burning skin
touch touch
burning within
poem by
Sally Omar
Warrning LOVE SENE and it may be too much for some. PG-13
in put is welcomed :) IF YOU SEE ANY MISS SPELLINGS AND SUCH PLEASE LET ME KNOW 
Immortal Love
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# 1 ARTISTS OF REDBUBBLE , ! Creative Writing & Poetry !, All Around the Styles, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Art And Text, Artists with Disabilities, AW Welcome Center, Bits and Pieces , Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Deviant Art Welcome, Dirty pretty things., FAN FRENZY, Featured Features - For Featured Art, Photography, T-Shirts, Writing, First Things, Got Melanocortin-1? , If it doesn't belong, Immortal Love, Just Fun, Live, Love, Dream: , Midnight Ramblers, Put Out! or Get Out!!!, Real Men Wear Tights , Shameless Self-Promotion, The Patchwork , The Red Writing Room, The Sensual Word, THE SISTERHOOD, Unconventional Artistry - 3 per day, Who are YOU to Judge? and Writing: Persuing HappinessThis story takes place two years after a war known as “White Rain”.The war was an effort of ethnic cleansing the human race of what some viewed as a stain on humanity. Any mutation with-in the human race qualified for the action of… cleansing by death. What they didn’t know, is SOME mutants were able to survive.
Professor Charles Exavor spent most of his life trying to preserve mutant rights by educating people on what it means to be mutant. He has always taught that mutants are part of humanity and a not a threat to the human race. But his efforts seem to have fallen on death ears during the White Rain War.
Some mutants had contradicted Exavor’s teaching and stepped against the humans thus giving rise to the war. These mutants wanted to rain supreme, and rid the world of the lower life forms…the humans.
The Human formed their own fanatical group in great numbers known as The Sons of Humanity. Their followers were known as The Anointed Ones. With the help of a mysterious figure that lurked in the dark shadows called the Deliverer, the humans had developed a kind of death gas that only effected those who carried a mutant gene. But not ALL mutants fell victom to the chemical warfare.
So many lives lost, so many teams that did not return from their missions. One such team was the team Scott Summers was on. He and four other mutants were sent to survey the area known as sector 19 located on one of the Canadian Arctic Islands called White Island. Sector 19 is where the creator of the mutant weapons and head of The Sons of Humanity was believed to be, the mastermind himself, The Deliverer.
When Jean Gray Summers heard the news of her husband Scott’s death, she fell into a great depression, she wasn’t the same Jean the XMen knew and loved. She even looked different. Sad and deer eyed, full of tears still left from the night before was the face she now wore. Logan, a fellow team mate whom has always loved Jean, was there for her more than anyone else. He put his own needs on hold to take care of Jean, becoming a dear and even closer friend than before. It was during this time that Jean had fallen in love with Logan and was coming out of her depression.
Chapter 1:
“Left Behind”
One night Jean was crying alone in her room, Logan heard her and walked to her door and softly Knocked.
“Red, you ok darling?” he asked softly.
“No Logan, (sniff) I’m not.” she sobs quietly.
“Want to talk about it darling?” he asked.
“I don’t know, but I sure could use a hug right about now.” (sniff)
Logan opens the door and walks towards her, he see her sitting on her bed with a box of Kleenex and a wedding album laying across her lap . Logan sits down beside her and hugs her closely as she cries deeply and hard into his chest ,soaking his red flannel shirt with her tears of pain.
“Why?!” she asks with an angry forced tone. “I Just feel so cheated!! We were planing so much. He even wanted to have a child.” She explained as she looked up and tried to wipe her eyes dry, but the tears kept coming faster than she could dab them away. “You know, the night the professor called Scott to duty was the same night we were talking about building a family. Part of me blames the professor for Scott’s death. I feel so guilty! I hate myself!” Her voice was now shaking as she spoke.
Logan held her closely. He kissed her on the head and stroked her hair.
looking her straight in the eyes he replied.
“Red, if it would take away your pain, I would gladly trade places with Scott.”
Jean could feel his love and empathy and her heart pounded with in her chest at the sound of his words.
“Oh Logan, that is the sweetest thing I ever heard,” she said
“I met every word Jean.” he stated firmly
Logan never was one to toss words around. He’s always been a man of his word.
Jean put her arms around Logan’s neck and kissed him passionately. Softly whispering in his ear the words till now he only dreamed about. “I want you Logan.”
Logan pulled away a little surprised and he asked in a direct voice, “Look me in the eye and say that Jean. Don’t play with me, are you sure? Are you REALLY sure, ‘cause once I start, I aint gonna be able to stop darling.”
As he requested Jean looked Logan in the eyes and stated with all honesty. “Yes, I’m sure.” She closed her eyes and pulled him close to her then kissed him repeatedly. Logan’s whole body charged as if an electrical volt hit him. He felt more alive then he had ever remembered feeling before. Still, a small voice in the back of his head kept saying “no”. he could barely hear it, and soon the rushing of his own blood drowned it out completely. He kissed Jean hard and with ownership at first, then the kiss grew into a passionate inferno between the two would be lovers.
Feeling his fire was more than Jean could ignore, she soon realized that she was not going to be in control for long and let Logan take control of her.
It was unlike anything she ever felt with Scott. Logan was not a man who played games, he loved her and he was showing her in his way. It was different than she ever thought. She now knew he was able to control how much of his thoughts she was able to read. Jean thought she KNEW well his feelings for her over the years, but she didn’t see how deep and powerful they truly were… until now.
He took his time with her, exploring every inch of her with his eyes as well as his fingers. it was as if he was memorizing her intire form, burning her very image into his mind. Logan didn’t rip her clothing off as she expected. he was gentle and respectful in removing her garments. Jean found this rvery exiting, and could hardly wait to have her turn at him. Each time Logan pulled her shirt up he looked her in the eye and kissed her softly and tenderly, as if he was making sure she really wanted to be with him. A few kisses latter her shirt was comletely removed and tossed onto the floor where it laid still and out of the way. He did the same with her blue jeans leaving her green laced matching undergarments on. Logan moved in for a finial kiss and began to take off his flannel tear soaked shirt when Jean stopped him. He had anticipated she may have second thoughts about this, so he stopped and let her lead. To his surprise, Jean did NOT have second thoughts, she just wanted to be the one to remove his clothing. He smiled at the site of her in that sexy green satin laced bra and pantie set , sitting with her legs folded under her before him, her red hair flowing as she unbuttoned his shirt and pulled it off. He could tell she was pressed to control her pace.
“It’s Ok Red, you aint gotta hold back darling, just do what you feel like doing.” he reassured her in a quite deep voice as he ran his hand up and down her side.
Jean didn’t say a word and pulled him out of his shirt only to find a white tank under shirt. She decided to follow his moves and leave that on…for now. But when she got to his blue jeans he formed a wicked grin that ran across his face as his blue eyes seemed to gleam. Jean looked up and took note of this.
“What are you grinning about you old devil?” she asked with a soft giggle.
“Devil? Me?” he said in a smoldering almost wolf like voice. “You really want to know what I’m grinning at?” he asked.
“Yes” Jean said.
“Ok, I’ll tell ya, see when you get past this belt buckle darling, you’re gonna know I don’t wear underwear.”
Jean stopped and put her hands to her face pretending to be shocked… “REALLY? Well who would have thought that?” she laughed.
He just looked at her with that same sinister grin. Then it hit her, there went her plan to follow his lead! And HE KNEW THAT.
“Well Logan, what’s a gal gonna do?” She joked as she unbuckled his belt. Logan could have “popped off” right then and there at the way she handled his belt and pulled the zipper down. “Now who’s PRESSED to control himself?” she teased with a smirk.
Suddenly Logan’s jeans seemed a bit too tight. “Oh you’re funny, aint yeah doll?” he smiled as he pulled her on top of him and laid back opening his legs and she gently settled between them. He resumed kissing her with that same passion he had been storing up for years. Jean slipped out of her bra and removed her underwear tossing them aside thinking Logan would jump out of his jeans and take her right away. But to her surprise he did not. He caress her breast with his warm hands and pulling her closer to him rolled her over on her back and kissed every inch of her with soft little kisses that felt like fluttering butterflies. She closed her eyes and enjoyed his efforts.
“mmmmmm, Logan I want to feel your skin on mine, feel your warmth”. she spoke.
Logan took off his undershirt and then his jeans. Jean opened her eyes just as he dropped his jeans onto the floor. Her eye s widened, she was NOT expecting …”that”, seems she had under estimated Logan all these years. “Oh my God, so that’s why the women are always running after you.” she thought to herself as she pulled him down onto her soft waiting skin. His hairy chest touched her the same way his kisses did. He was very careful not to put too much of his weight on her as he entered her . Slow at first was the pace, but as soon as she was use to him that changed and all his desires were strongly revealed, all night long.
LTScribble
Whew, is it warm in here or do i have a case of he vapors…......Nice read…I kind of always saw Logan with Storm…..The whole true love Scott thing…......but ahem….i think i will rethink that…. :o)
Patricia Anne ... replied
Thank you so much Lis for reading it, yeah I see him with her too but she is married to Black Pather now so it feels weird. Ans Jean is out of the pitcher and Scot is with Emma Frost wtf? LOL This story was written way before that tho.
Renate Dartois
Oh wow what a hot sensual story Patricia so well written I could picture and almost feel every moment of passion I think I go and eat some chocolate now…..
Patricia Anne ... replied
heehee thank you my friend… well err let’s say I am GLAD hubby is home today! lol
Shanina Conway
Who turned the aircon up?......Agh! Patricia, now you’ve Logan cheating on me…:(
Great tale girl;)
Patricia Anne ... replied
LOL Just die your hair read and he’ll come begging back!
Thanks! there is more to this tale it is kind of sad and groosome in some parts.
Patricia Anne ...
RED not read wtf! LOL@Me
Martin Muir
Pheww awesome writing, could see logan and jean all the time amazing well done,
just going for a cold shower. :)
Patricia Anne ... replied
LOL Thanks for taking time to read it, glad you liked it :) Enjoy your shower!
Sally Omar
Absolutely Incredible!!!!!! Passionate & Sensuous!!!!!! xoxoxoxoxo
Patricia Anne ... replied
xoxoxox thank you so MUCh Sally girl :)
Karin Taylor
Well, that was worth the wait!!! and what a long wait it was… sorry for that, i didn’t know what i was missing out on, obviously lol… it’s like a sauna in here, giggles… you can sure write, the imagery you create is incredible, full of passion and longing reaching this amazing crescendo…there is light and shade, just as when a quality singer/musician produces a piece that has elements that maintain the flow, and yet keep you interested with alternating notes and interesting rythmns, slow here, quickening there and leaving you always wanting more, you have the same ability! xxxx
Patricia Anne ... replied
wow that’s a keeper, honored for the compliment :) thank you :)
Karin Taylor
...and i think i forgot to mention it’s FANTASTIC!!!! :)))
Patricia Anne ... replied
LOL thanks girlfriend
Samantha Bla Bla
Now that is what I call writing!! Damn girl I am moving onto the next chapter and may be up all night? This is GREAT you are so talented Patricia : ) gotta go to next chapter much love my friend, but I can’t wait to know what happens next! I hate waiting : ) Thanks for telling me about the story : ) All I need now is rain a big storm and this would be PERFECT
Patricia Anne ... replied
HEEHEE I am VERY glad you like it! it is a great way to runn away to a new reality and know that others share that with you with out even leaving the house! You deseave a fun time sweetie :)
Sally Omar
Thank you so much for posting ‘TOUCH TOUCH” with this awesome piece!!!!!!!! Love You,
Sally xoxoxoxoxo
Patricia Anne ... replied
your very welcomed!
Samantha Bla Bla
Thanks Patricia, your right I do! I can’t stop reading last night I fell asleep at my desk here trying to finish part 2 : ) good stuff gotta go back now while I’m awake!
Patricia Anne ... replied
Look forward to you imput! :)
morgansartworld
Amazing writing as the others have said you can truly write, you can feel the passion and so well written
you just need to get them proof read as all us writers even me a teacher for 30 years still get spelling mistakes i even have them in my books after they have been proofread lol
apart from that you write with such depth that captures you and entices you to read more
excellent
morgan
Patricia Anne ... replied
Thank you , wow.
Yes I am planing to get a proof reader, lol It is a weakness for me I have dyslexia and writing is hard for me but comics strike such an intrest that it made me want to get better at it so I tryed. As now I am not in school but I have one teacher who may beable to proof it, I have to wait till I go back to school when money gets better. I live a solitary life so it’s a bit hard at times but I AGREE needs proof reading! lol
wingsoffire
Well, Miss Patricia, I thank you for bringing me here new friend. I love how you set the whole story in motion and through tradgedy can bring about love. The passion is vivid it was like I was watching a movie, your descriptions are felt deeply. I thought you were going to have his blades deployed before he ravishes the lovely Jean. This was GRRRRRREatttttt!!!!!
Patricia Anne ... replied
LOL Well he uses them in the rest of the story… I thought about puting them in this one in the love seen, but I’m not really a Jean Grey fan,I don’t think she is passiante enogh to make Logan pop his claws… she has, welll read on and you’ll see why.
Patricia Anne ... replied
Oh yes nd THANK you :)
raymondoantonio
THIS IS SERIOUSLY WONDERFUL WRITING!! I WILL READ ALL OF THIS!! BRAVO!!! X
Patricia Anne ... replied
ticked pink :D thank you so much xoxox
anaisnais 19 days ago
Hot hot hot! Great write – I can see this getting on the shelves so far so good…. Well done!
Patricia Anne ... replied 18 days ago
That is a dream of mine, lol One day some marvel comic producer sees the story and just HAS to have it and poof comic or novel or graphic novel! yeah that would be SWEET :) xoxoxoxooxoxoxoxxoxo 2U