The Great Feast
Had to write something up for the next Writers’ Meeting.
The Great Feast belongs to the following groups:
All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical and Short stories - Spherical ScriptingsAnd a royal feast, it was.
A feast for beautiful people and pathetic disciples alike, prepared by the Order of Hedonistic Manipulators.
It began with the tidbits – the Canapés.
Succulent little offerings, tempting, tantalising, baited morsels – glistening with honey, coated with praise, laced with thick and slow-flowing nectar, to draw eye away from Barb.
The Pathetics clamoured and called.
“More”, they cried.
“Give us more! Feed Us!”
And so they were fed.
The Barbs wound and screwed their spiraling path deeper into the mass-hysterical monument of man-made social blindness.
Next – the Entrée
And oh, what an Entrée!
Sex – in all its forms – writhing, lubricating, sensuous and scintillating, sluicing through barren floodgates, coursing over the tired and dried out, seeping beneath the hidden and craven.
The Barbs dug deep, hooking entrails and making home.
And what have we here?
The Main arrives, as expected. An affluence-fattened idol of gilt and guilt. Monstrously impressive. A meal to outlast all meals – a continuous repast to meet all desires, fill all holes, patch all souls. And secreted within the Main were the clever little Poisons – designer fluids, fabricated by the cleverest of Manipulators. Liquid worms of deception, feeding confidence and security to the greed-blinded Pathetics. These Poisons were not subtle enough to be completely indiscernible, but enough to not cause panic. The Manipulators were not ready for panic just yet. First the seduction, then the fear. An age-old recipe that had never failed.
The Barbs nested and multiplied on the fuel of mankind’s apathy.
And as the gathering lay bloated and glazed, a horn was heard, heralding the coup de gras. Out came the just Desserts on platters of cured skins. The wafting odour of spices and sugar aroused the Pathetics for the ultimate thrust – one last and final charge to the abyss of plenty. Staggering and crawling, mewling as little kittens, leaping like agile ancestors, or striding forward purposefully with the light of righteous banalities – it mattered not. Eventually, all came to take part in the final and most desirous Dessert imaginable. Following each other, holding hands, singing praise to the all mighty Manipulators, they steadily swarmed over the black edge of fulfilment, and smiled and congratulated each other as they fell.
The Manipulators laughed in surprise, and clapped their hands despite the predictability, even while they prepared for the next Feast.
Karin Taylor
excellent
Suzanne German
Order of Hedonistic Manipulators.....i suppose if this is realated to lisag’s ‘feast’ then we are not talking about a belly dancer…?!!! :)))
Suzanne German
...more like Caligula by the sounds of it!! and extremely well written mark!!!
Suzanne German
...an extremely bad fashion show??? ...i’m just guessing here man!!
Jan Piller
I thought he was talking about the masses that use Photoshop!!!! hahaha Excellent work Mark!
Suzanne German
yes he isn’t telling either – but that’s my brother – he just LOVES to spin things out and keep everybody guessing!!! lisa and brett have written ‘feasty’ things too…hmm…WHAT are they all on about i wonder?!
Brett Foster
Great piece Mark!
berndt2
NIce. “The Manipulators laughed in surprise” – love it. Like not even they could believe the stupdity they’d assumed in others really did exist to that extent.
Mark German
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Like not even they could believe the stupdity they’d assumed in others really did exist to that extent.
:) – love it when the meaning comes through despite my coy subtlety… :)
lesliedunnlopez
Thoroughly enjoyble, imaginative and…deep. Tantalizingly original!