Speak in tongues and no one sees
Lies and misconceptions weaved
Wave your arms, a stunning dance
That sultry look and upward glance
Your beauty hammer-fists bestow
Your wanton lust the strong kowtows
Beguile, denude, bend to your will
Ever pressure, till breast stands still
A tearing, searing, screaming howl
Cannot pass your defensive cowl
You shield that inner sensitive soul
With welded links and practiced role
Come a day, when chinks appear
When guards are dropped and thoughts unclear
A brilliant light becomes a sword
And songs once sung peel final chords
Christina Martin
OH my sounds like a bad person.. Well writen
Arcangelina
So intriguing.
Lys •
god…i see me in this entire thing, i mean, at least the way im understanding it. im vicious though sometimes, i know i am. and i always keep my “inner sensitive soul” shielded with “welded links and practiced role.” ive gotten quite good at it, now that its been about 4 or 5 years since i’ve been in this scene. i especially like the ending though “And songs once sung peel final chords.” Gorgeous as always Mark, but I don’t have to tell you that ;)
LisaG
Very powerful and thought provoking…...
Jessica Tremp
beautifully written as always Mark
mick8585
nice to see you scratchin an itch mate. keep up this good work.
Anne van Alkemade
Great writing, rhythm, imagery. Like it.
Suzanne German
geezus mark…wooaaahhhh….is this a jezabel…? extremely powerful and thought provoking…lovely!
eponavisions
wow mark, i so agree with suzanne. you affirm that there are men who know the ways of heart soul body. i must put in my journal. such an inspired writing. almost a shakesphere. only better. the beat, the rhythm, iambic pentamater. wow. wow wow. great. janet
sandra2kk
Hello mark
i loved the first verse but not so much the rest it seemed that you tried ti ryme to much and less true feelings but hey wat do i know
sandra
LocoCow
Well cond=structed, that final line is a great closer…
MissKristy
Don’t know how I missed this one..but loved hearing it read out yesterday. Really brilliant work Mark xox
PJ Ryan
wow ! LOVE this .. so powerful .. such fabulous flow.