High-Flyer

Mark German
Author: Mark German
Word Count: 167
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She was flown ever higher, needing to feel the heat.
It fuelled her, revived her, gave her credence, respect, and a meaning.

Of course she knew of Icarus.
She solved this annoying problem by using her patrons as shields. Human shields.
Shields protected her from the heat, while giving her altitude. A wonderful symbiotic relationship. A win-win situation.

Oh, the flyers enjoyed the ride for a while. Prancing and preening, dragging the inconspicuous rider along with them – carrying her upwards, higher and higher to the strains of her childish and innocent pleas. She urged them, goaded them, scolded them, loved them.

They shone in the bright light, were little stars for a short while. And despite knowing how it would end, they were caught in the rush. They, too, knew of Icarus – but it didn’t matter. Their’s was joy of companionship. A relatively small sacrifice. Nothing really – just oblivion.

The molten blobs of fame covering her back were the mark of her success.

High-Flyer

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Short stories - Spherical Scriptings
  • Anne van Alkemade

    Anne van AlkemadeWordsmith, 6 months ago

    although 17 words over – I wonder why you, and this, are not part of Flash Fiction! It certainly has the quality {{grin}}

  • LisaG

    LisaG, 6 months ago

    I’m blown away…...this piece of amazing writing resonates to my core….

    Thank you for writing it….

  • demon

    demon, 6 months ago

    Mark…many a work I have read on here…and this by far is in the top echelon…let me just stand back and give you applause…fucking brilliant….

  • Lorraine Creagh

    Lorraine Creagh, 6 months ago

    So few words… says so much. I very much enjoyed reading it. =)

  • Deri Dority

    Deri Dority, 6 months ago

    So beautifully written. This is really top-notch.

  • Bryan Davidson

    Bryan Davidson, 6 months ago

    That is tops. Seriously.

  • mick8585

    mick8585, 6 months ago

    Good stuff mate. You pick an idea and get all over it like a rash. You can do this shit all right.

  • Mark German

    Mark German, 6 months ago

    Thanks, guys :)

    Mick Icarus just kept winging through my head :)

  • marieancolie

    marieancolie, 6 months ago

    I was not able to say a word while reading this.
    Too strong/moving for me.
    more than beautiful

  • Suzanne German

    Suzanne German, 6 months ago

    This is so bitter-sweet mark…..strong with passionate feeling and a sadness.

    Who is SHE ???

  • Arcangelina

    Arcangelina, 6 months ago

    Intriguing writing Mark.
    Beauty and Power written in words.

  • Brad Sumner GLP

    Brad Sumner GLP, 6 months ago

    .............................................!

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