Bitter night…and Dark, Mother of Fears; thy cloying sway enraptures me
Succulently sweet a lover’s grasp, made stealthily, without pity nor remorse
To suffocate and repress the radiant, thine employ is yet fairly done
I call for thy cloak now, to shroud mine eyes from earthly aghasts
Let Light perish, as Decency hath perished – let me evermore languish in your numbing blindness…
Suzanne German
wow mark – amazing! love it!
suzanne
Suzanne German
mark who or what is ccw3 – ? stop drinking so much coffee and coke LOL!!!!
sgx
Mark German
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LisaG
Exceptional writing…...
I know it came just before I woke :((((
MissKristy
DAMN..I wish I had written that :) Lovely language and it flows beautifully. Hope the insomnia leaves you soon xox
Suzanne German
ok – mark just had a look at the link – i hope you win this comp – your piece rocks!
love your sis’ xxx
mick8585
sweet little number mate. touch of the Goth about it. Insomnia sucks man.
Mark German
Had 40 minutes sleep last ‘night’ grrrrr….
And a stressful work day ahead…
mick8585
good luck with the day. Dont forget the sun glasses.
melissa spalding
wow! period. wow!
demon
Good one Mark…hope you manage to find that great friend, named sleep…not sleeping well does not auger well for work or mind…good luck
John Segon-Fis...
Let Light perish, as Decency hath perished – let me evermore languish in your numbing blindness…No, Mark, we must go on.
But strange how your haunting and wonderful words reminded me of Benigni’s monologue in “La Tigre e la neve (The tiger and the snow)” when he writes about the effect that Vittoria’s death would have on him?
The monologue goes something like this (forgive me, my Italian is not that great): “If she dies, they can close this whole show of a world, they can cart it off, unscrew the stars, roll up the sky and put it on a truck! They can turn off this sunlight I love so much. For, you know why I love it so much? Because I love her when the sun shines on her. They can take everything away, these carpets, columns, houses, sand, wind, frogs, ripe watermelons, hail, seven in the evening, May, June, July, basil, bees, the sea, courgettes…courgettes!..”
It’s what I love about writing: like, how different pieces seem to come together and connect in my mind. In some crazy way, the are different and yet, the same.
But, hey, I’m crazy!
Mark German
That’s a wonderful piece of work, which I haven’t read before, John.
I suppose my little rambling up there is more about being tired. Tired in many ways. Unfortunately, I go through rapid peaks and troughs…
Damian
Mark, this is fantastic. I really enjoyed the language and feel of it. Sorry it took insomnia to produce (but it was worth it for the rest of us lol)
Bridgett Ferguson
wow Mark….I am speechless!
....Let Light perish, as Decency hath perished ….. ....beautiful
and brilliant!
QEverything
Wow, wonderful work!
Leon Walker
Very nice piece!!!
Metamorphosis
very intense Mark, so who won the comp?
Mark German
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Not me ;)