Chandelier Brain
trying to do some effin work
Chandelier Brain
Swinging, spinning
Effervescent light
Wild scurrying shadows
Thoughts like a baseball bat
Heavy, quick, thudding
Thundering through diaphanous shrouds
Splintering into toothpick shards
Mind like a clamp
Sealing, healing
Tenaciously determined
Tightly squeezing…
Ideas galloping, leaping
Flashes, sparks, hot embers
Random, disorientating, dislocating
Nauseous free-wheeling
Chandelier Brain
Your screeching in painful
Your constant calling is sickening
Please – turn off
Jessica Tremp
have a cup of tea and take a deep breath or just keep writing great stuff…your choice
Sara Lamond
Wild night last night Mark?
Have to admit I thought by the title it was going to be a funny/sarcastic one, but definitely not…
Well written – there’s really a feeling of desperation, confusion, some anger…. hmm bit scary!
MissKristy
“Thundering through diaphanous shrouds
Splintering into toothpick shards”
Brilliant! So damn clever. Hugggles. Shh…you never saw me here ;)
Lisa Jewell
Tenderise that tender into submission….
Whilst I work with a tenderised brain…..
Mark German
lmao@Kristy hehehehe
Jess – just sat down to a tea, on your advice.
Sara – I am scary …. bwwwuhahahaha!
Lisa – spitting out the gristle
Lisa Jewell
You’re not really scary, you big pussy…..OH fine, with a manic mind of delusion ;)
Harmless, really….
Mark German
You calling me fat?
Lisa Jewell
You’re sounding like a chicka…..LOL
Get back to the tender…...
Suzanne German
wow mark – that’s hot! I like it lots!
straight to favs!
Suzannex
Suzanne German
so mark…does tarzan feature in part two or ws that a jungle scene! LOL sgx
mick8585
get back to work now , you hear !
your imagery is clear to me though , good work.
Christina Martin
oh my
Jason Moses
“Effervescent light” is so good. You’ve done some effin fine work with this one.
transmute
Yes, love the images this creates. I can almost feel the scintillatingly painful rattling in my head.