Chandelier Brain

Mark German
Author: Mark Germancommunity host
Word Count: 63
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Chandelier Brain

trying to do some effin work

Chandelier Brain
Swinging, spinning
Effervescent light
Wild scurrying shadows

Thoughts like a baseball bat
Heavy, quick, thudding
Thundering through diaphanous shrouds
Splintering into toothpick shards

Mind like a clamp
Sealing, healing
Tenaciously determined
Tightly squeezing…

Ideas galloping, leaping
Flashes, sparks, hot embers
Random, disorientating, dislocating
Nauseous free-wheeling

Chandelier Brain
Your screeching in painful
Your constant calling is sickening
Please – turn off

  • Jessica  Tremp

    Jessica Tremp

    have a cup of tea and take a deep breath or just keep writing great stuff…your choice

  • Sara Lamond

    Sara Lamond

    Wild night last night Mark?

    Have to admit I thought by the title it was going to be a funny/sarcastic one, but definitely not…

    Well written – there’s really a feeling of desperation, confusion, some anger…. hmm bit scary!

  • MissKristy

    MissKristy

    “Thundering through diaphanous shrouds
    Splintering into toothpick shards”

    Brilliant! So damn clever. Hugggles. Shh…you never saw me here ;)

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    Tenderise that tender into submission….

    Whilst I work with a tenderised brain…..

  • Mark German

    Mark Germancommunity host

    lmao@Kristy hehehehe
    Jess – just sat down to a tea, on your advice.
    Sara – I am scary …. bwwwuhahahaha!
    Lisa – spitting out the gristle

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    You’re not really scary, you big pussy…..OH fine, with a manic mind of delusion ;)

    Harmless, really….

  • Mark German

    Mark Germancommunity host

    You calling me fat?

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    You’re sounding like a chicka…..LOL

    Get back to the tender…...

  • Suzanne German

    Suzanne German

    wow mark – that’s hot! I like it lots!

    straight to favs!

    Suzannex

  • Suzanne German

    Suzanne German

    so mark…does tarzan feature in part two or ws that a jungle scene! LOL sgx

  • mick8585

    mick8585

    get back to work now , you hear !
    your imagery is clear to me though , good work.

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  • Jason Moses

    Jason Moses

    “Effervescent light” is so good. You’ve done some effin fine work with this one.

  • transmute

    transmute

    Yes, love the images this creates. I can almost feel the scintillatingly painful rattling in my head.

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