Eat Me

Mark German
Author: Mark Germancommunity host
Word Count: 64
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Eat Me

She bit him a little – just a gentle nibble
His flesh warm, yielding, salty

He slept

She tasted him – a musky tang
His hard ridges and muscled form

He slept

She licked his skin – sensations blooming
His fine downy hair like miniature wheat fields

He slept

She hungered, then – needed
His body a banquet

He stirred

His eyes opened
Dreamily he said
Eat me…

  • Lauren O'Keefe

    Lauren O'Keefe

    wow… that’s sexy. i’m going off to have a cold shower now ;)

  • Melissa Vowell

    Melissa Vowell

    I’m guessing she didn’t decline this wonderful offer

  • Mark German

    Mark Germancommunity host

    No, and she left nothing but the bones…

  • demon

    demon

    I see you must have woken UP well this morning…lol

    good one Mark..

  • Rhana Griffin

    Rhana Griffinvanilla slice maker

    Whew!!! Did somebody say cold shower??

  • Colin Tobin

    Colin Tobin

    Great work. Extremely sensual.

  • MissKristy

    MissKristy

    Delicious..

    Particularly love some of the imagery ‘His fine downy hair like miniature wheat fields’ Brilliant stuff!

  • Trish Cooper

    Trish Cooper

    WOW…....very erotic and sexual…....simply delicious…

  • Matthew Mitchell

    Matthew Mitchell

    really like that mark

  • John Segon-Fisher,  RPA

    John Segon-Fis...

    Wow. What a night!!! Too good, Mark

  • Andrew Bosman

    Andrew Bosman

    Tasty Mark, VERY tasty…....

  • mick8585

    mick8585

    is it gettin hot in here, or is it just me ?

  • Chris White

    Chris White

    I will next time I see you…

  • papillonman

    papillonman

    sounds like you have some fun in the bedroom…very good …papillonman

  • ginny

    ginny

    yum

  • Jessica  Tremp

    Jessica Tremp

    oh man, yummm…i’m walking to the fridge now to some substitute for this!

  • bites

    bites

    mmmm…...!!!

  • Anne van Alkemade

    Anne van AlkemadeWordsmith

    LOL. Aha, said in sandy-eyed tones of mumbling lips.
    Very nice Mark. There is a poet in that soul too.

  • Sharon Mau

    Sharon Mau

    You paint a wonderful image with delicious words

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