There was a Star
There was a Star belongs to the following groups:
All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical and Melbourne & VictoriaThere was a star
I saw when young
Mystic magic hole in Heaven
Following, watching, comforting presence
I forgot my star
Wandering, randomly careening
Pressing forward powerfully and reckless
..yet feckless, losing direction and eventually, momentum
Now swirling, dizzyingly
I struggle to see through the clouds
Through the haze of wishes and emotions
Missing my star
Jan Piller
Your writing holds so much emotion. This sounds so sad. I hope you find your star again Mark.
Nancy Polanski
You need to get back there, my friend. Look to Heaven, it’s still there.
Very nicely written.
mimi yoon
hope the sky’s clear tonight
and hope you get to see your star tonight…
sad and beautiful at once…
Lisa Defazio
Tsk you and your talent….never fails ;)
Beautiful.
Hmmm you have managed to inspire me…stay tuned!
Caroline Gorka
Beautifully sad …you are one guy Mark …
:) xx
Aurora Pintore
VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM, LOVE IT !!!!!
Suzanne German
A truly delightful poem Mark, sad but sort of explains travelling through life and its journeys doesn’t it. Reminds me of that song I used to love as a teenager, with a line that says I’ve looked at clouds from both sides now, from up and down and still somehow, it’s clouds illusions I recall, I really don’t know clouds at all.....sad but nice….love this one.