A Paper Boat

Mark German
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Word Count: 131
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A Paper Boat

For all of you who began reading my last epically lengthy work, only to falter after seeing that it was not a trifling little ditty to be gobbled up in a single mouthful – here’s something more manageable.

A Paper Boat belongs to the following groups:

OCAU Photographers and All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical

I want to build a paper boat
to float away on the gushing waters
of the city streets and urban lanes

Setting sail against splashing wheels
I’ll deftly skip over debris rapids
Navigating swirls of brimming rain

I want to feel the paper light
Illuminate my tiny cabin
Casting textual newspaper shadows

I will make me a paper hat
Just like a real sailor
And man the helm shouting ‘ahoy!’

Perhaps on my journeys
I’ll meet other boats
And see sailors like me

Maybe there will be the occasional bump
Our boats may entangle
And we’ll heave to for repairs

And maybe we’ll chat a while
Talk about the weather
And have a cuppa tea

And then we’ll set sail
Like we are supposed to
And travel the gutters again

  • Maria Medeiros

    Maria Medeiros

    So beautiful! lovely !

  • Lorraine Creagh

    Lorraine Creagh

    So delightful…would make a lovely children’s story. Now for illustrations.. =P

  • MissKristy

    MissKristy

    Oh Mark…why did you have to go and remind me of Sailors? LOL This is so exquisitely beautiful…and absolutely sums up where I am at right now too. Thanks for sharing.

  • PJ Ryan

    PJ Ryan

    And then we’ll set sail
    Like we are supposed to
    And travel the gutters again

    killer stanza .. absolutely love it

    beautiful metaphor and imagery in this piece

  • Edward Denyer

    Edward Denyer

    Nice one Mark – Ted

  • Caroline Gorka

    Caroline Gorka

    Oh Mark…you wrote it :)))
    Beautiful imagery xx

  • Mary Campbell

    Mary Campbell

    Every city childs dream, as an adult sailor I’d love to be able to travel this way when stuck in the urban world.

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